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Message from sedef88 posted on 06-05-2019 at 22:10:15 (D | E | F)
Hello.
Can you help me to correct my mistakes, please?
At morning when i wake up, i whatch outside from the window at first. If i see the sunshine throw the window i become happy and i think that the life is so beautiful. I feel always the positive effect of the sunny days on my mood. I love summer? i love to see sunrise every day, i love sunshine who is fulling in my room throw the window. I love to listen at silence the singing of the birds on the tries. I can hope for tomorrow. I hope that all will be better.

Thanks for any reply.

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Edited by lucile83 on 06-05-2019 22:16

Re: Text/correction from lucile83, posted on 07-05-2019 at 15:04:51 (D | E)
Anyone?

Re: Text/correction from sedef88, posted on 07-05-2019 at 17:33:03 (D | E)
Not yet

Re: Text/correction from here4u, posted on 07-05-2019 at 17:58:26 (D | E)
Hello!

At (wrong preposition + necessary determiner) morning when i (always capitalised!) wake up, i whatch(= spelling!) outside from the window at first. If i see the sunshine throw (confusion) preposition needed) the window i become happy and i think that the(no article here!) life is so beautiful. I feel always(wrong word order) the positive effect of the sunny days on my mood. I love summer? i love to see sunrise every day, i love sunshine who (used for a person!)is fulling in my room throw the window. I love to listen at silence, (don't forget the necessary punctuation!) the singing of the birds on the tries. I (Yes!) can hope for tomorrow. I hope that all will be better.

Re: Text/correction from sedef88, posted on 08-05-2019 at 21:55:48 (D | E)
Good evening!

Here is my corrected text.

İn the morning when I wake up, I watch outside through the window at first. If I see the sunshine through the window I become happy and I think that life is so beautiful. I always feel the positive effect of the sunny days on my mood. I love summer, I love to see sunrise every day, I love sunshine which is entering in my room through the window. I love to listen at silence, the singing of the birds on the trees. I can hope for tomorrow. I hope that all will be better.

Thanks for your help.

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