Correction/lettre

Correction/lettre
Message de haades posté le 07-01-2021 à 13:58:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'espère que vous allez bien, tout d'abord bonne année
Je voudrais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à corriger ma lettre de stage en Anglais.
Merci d'avance 😘
Bonne journée


Currently a 10th year student at Jules Valles school in Saint Leu d'Esserent, I am preparing for my GCSE exams. Against this background, I decided to write a letter for work experience with the aim of gaining some work experience and increasing my science and physics skills if possible in your lab during the month of July .

Fascinated by the fields of science, in particular by physics; my passion gave birth to a project which means a lot to me. Indeed, from now on I intend to pursue a career in science.
This is why this work experience in your laboratory will be an opportunity for me to affirm my vocation.

I have good linguistics skills : I can speak French and I am going to pass b1 certificate in German.
I'm good at solving problems and I'm found of creating new ideas
I am dynamic, voluntary, self-reliant and motivated. As for my Hobbies I play tennis twice a week , I crazy about playing the piano and finally I am a member of the swimming Club since seven years.
I look forward to hearing from you soon...

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Réponse : Correction/lettre de gerondif, postée le 07-01-2021 à 14:23:15 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreurs en bleu
Currently a 10th year student at Jules Valles school in Saint Leu d'Esserent, I am preparing for my GCSE exams. Against (pourquoi contre ? on top of, en plus de ?) this background, I decided to write a letter to apply for work experience* with the aim of in order to gain some work experience and increase my science and physics skills if possible in your lab during the month of in July .

*Pour l'idée de faire un stage, voir les pistes de linguee
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Fascinated by the fields of science, in particular by physics, my passion gave birth to a project which means a lot to me. Indeed, from now on, I intend to pursue a career in science.
This is why this work experience in your laboratory will be an opportunity for me to affirm/reinforce/ my vocation.

I have good linguistics skills : I can speak French and I am going to pass a b1 certificate in German.
I'm good at solving problems and I'm found (fond) of creating new ideas.(I like creating, I love creating serait plus courant, I am fond of s'applique souvent à des actrivités récréatives)
I am dynamic, voluntary, self-reliant and motivated. As for my hobbies, I play tennis twice a week , I am crazy about playing the piano and finally I am have been a member of the swimming club since for seven years.
I look forward to hearing from you soon...
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Good luck !

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Réponse : Correction/lettre de haades, postée le 07-01-2021 à 14:36:29 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup, vous me sauvez la vie 😘

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