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Message de chloee28 posté le 08-09-2013 à 13:34:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais avoir de l'aide pour corriger ma présentation d'anglais, je n'arrive pas à voir mes fautes! (l'anglais ce n'est pas trop mon truc)
Merci d'avance!
Hi!
so, my name is ...., a girl who born in ......, the 28 march 1996. I've got 17 years old, and soon 18! I'm so exited!
According to me, I'm very smart, 1m55 is not veru tall! I've got black curly hair, blue eyes and fair skin(like snow white!). people around me said I'm responsable, polite and funny but like everyone i've got defects: touchy, too much touchy, shy , stressed and so stressful and i have the warm- blodded.... Like everyone, I have a dream but he's very simple: i just want to be happy, in good health! There exist one thing I hate, i'ts racism: i don't undersatnd why it exists!
Ive the phobia about storm: I'm so frightened when i herd it!
I adore the lasagna, but endives disgust me! My guilty pleasure is the chocolate, oh god I can't refuse a scrap ofchocolate, it's like a drug!
I have the chance to have two sisters: the last one call ........ and she has 20, an the second call...... But quite frequently, we quarrel, like every sisters/brothers in the world.
I spend a fabulous holidays! Even if I worked entire month of july in the library of the town. I saw my friends all days, we bathed in the lac and we been partying! It was so cool!!!
To finish, i've a challenge for this years: be graduate, I hope so because i want to change of life!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-09-2013 13:47
Message de chloee28 posté le 08-09-2013 à 13:34:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais avoir de l'aide pour corriger ma présentation d'anglais, je n'arrive pas à voir mes fautes! (l'anglais ce n'est pas trop mon truc)
Merci d'avance!
Hi!
so, my name is ...., a girl who born in ......, the 28 march 1996. I've got 17 years old, and soon 18! I'm so exited!
According to me, I'm very smart, 1m55 is not veru tall! I've got black curly hair, blue eyes and fair skin(like snow white!). people around me said I'm responsable, polite and funny but like everyone i've got defects: touchy, too much touchy, shy , stressed and so stressful and i have the warm- blodded.... Like everyone, I have a dream but he's very simple: i just want to be happy, in good health! There exist one thing I hate, i'ts racism: i don't undersatnd why it exists!
Ive the phobia about storm: I'm so frightened when i herd it!
I adore the lasagna, but endives disgust me! My guilty pleasure is the chocolate, oh god I can't refuse a scrap ofchocolate, it's like a drug!
I have the chance to have two sisters: the last one call ........ and she has 20, an the second call...... But quite frequently, we quarrel, like every sisters/brothers in the world.
I spend a fabulous holidays! Even if I worked entire month of july in the library of the town. I saw my friends all days, we bathed in the lac and we been partying! It was so cool!!!
To finish, i've a challenge for this years: be graduate, I hope so because i want to change of life!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-09-2013 13:47
Réponse: Correction /présentation de chloee28, postée le 09-09-2013 à 12:46:22 (S | E)
S'il vous plait je dois rendre ce travail mercredi!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-09-2013 15:27
Réponse: Correction /présentation de bluestar, postée le 09-09-2013 à 13:59:37 (S | E)
Bonjour...vous devriez vérifier l'utilisation des majuscules en anglais; aussi savoir comment déclarer votre âge
so,Mmy name is ...., a girl who (verbe?) born in ......,on the 28 Mmarch 1996. I've got (pas en Anglais!)17 years old, and (verbe?) soon 18! I'm so excited!
very simple: i (maj.)wantto be happy, in good health! There exists one thing I hate, I've the a phobia about storms: I'm so frightened when i herd hear it!
I adore the lasagna, but endives disgust me! My guilty pleasure is the chocolate, oh god I can't refuse a scrap of chocolate, it's like a drug!
I have the chance
to have two sisters: the last one called ........ and she has 20, an the second called...... But quite frequently, we quarrel, like every all sisters/brothers in the world.I spend a fabulous holidays! Even if I worked the entire month of july (maj.) in the library of the town. I saw my friends all every days, we bathed in the lac (un mot francais) and we (verbe?) been partying! It was so cool!!!
To finish, i've(maj.) a challenge for this year: to graduate.I hope so becausei want to change of my life!
Réponse: Correction /présentation de chloee28, postée le 09-09-2013 à 20:38:36 (S | E)
Oh merci beaucoup! ��
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