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Message de doctorfight posté le 06-10-2013 à 17:47:32 (S | E | F)
Salut Bonjour,,
je dois faire une expression écrite dans laquelle je dois décrire ma ville idéale en utilisant I would like etc et j'aimerais être corrigé car les langues, ce n' est pas mon fort!
Merci pour vos réponses!
My ideal town will be big. I would like 6 district with lot of subway for cover very fast the city. The subway will be automatic for be in service 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Un the first district, i would be a beautiful beach whith white sand.
The second district, i would like it s dedicated only to sport. I would like one gym,3 boxing team,a large swimming pool and 1 big sports park with skate park, football, rugby and basket field.
The third district will be devoted to studies. I would like 1 business school, 1 inegenior school and 1 medicine school. I would also like professional school for all job.
For the fourth district, i would like museum for all culture. Cinema, painting, photo, statue, music etc.
The fifth district will be a big attraction park and lot of activity for have adrenaline like skydiving, elastic jump etc.
And i would like the sixth for medicine. I would like medical research center, hospital and veterinary.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-10-2013 18:06
Message de doctorfight posté le 06-10-2013 à 17:47:32 (S | E | F)
je dois faire une expression écrite dans laquelle je dois décrire ma ville idéale en utilisant I would like etc et j'aimerais être corrigé car les langues, ce n' est pas mon fort!
Merci pour vos réponses!
My ideal town will be big. I would like 6 district with lot of subway for cover very fast the city. The subway will be automatic for be in service 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Un the first district, i would be a beautiful beach whith white sand.
The second district, i would like it s dedicated only to sport. I would like one gym,3 boxing team,a large swimming pool and 1 big sports park with skate park, football, rugby and basket field.
The third district will be devoted to studies. I would like 1 business school, 1 inegenior school and 1 medicine school. I would also like professional school for all job.
For the fourth district, i would like museum for all culture. Cinema, painting, photo, statue, music etc.
The fifth district will be a big attraction park and lot of activity for have adrenaline like skydiving, elastic jump etc.
And i would like the sixth for medicine. I would like medical research center, hospital and veterinary.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-10-2013 18:06
Réponse: Ville idéale/correction de doctorfight, postée le 07-10-2013 à 12:29:22 (S | E)
C'est pour cette aprem, ça serait vraiment cool si quelqu'un pouvait corriger juste les grosses fautes
Merci!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-10-2013 12:35
Réponse: Ville idéale/correction de lucile83, postée le 07-10-2013 à 12:42:39 (S | E)
Hello
Les plus grosses en bleu; il en reste ...
My ideal town will be big. I would like 6 district plural with lot of subwayplural TO find cover very fast the city. The subway will be automatic for be in service 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Un the first district, i would be a beautiful beach whith white sand.
The second district, i would like it s dedicated only to sport. I would like one gym,3 boxing team,a large swimming pool and 1 big sports park with skate park, football, rugby and basket field.
The third district will be devoted to studies. I would like 1 business school, 1 inegenior school and 1 medicine school. I would also like professional school for all jobplural.
For the fourth district, i would like museumplural for all culture. Cinema, painting, photo, statue, music etc.
The fifth district will be a big attraction park and lot of activityplural for have adrenaline like skydiving, elastic jump etc.
And i would like the sixth for medicine. I would like medical research center
, hospital and veterinary.Réponse: Ville idéale/correction de doctorfight, postée le 07-10-2013 à 20:49:49 (S | E)
Merci lucile83!
À la place de for, je dois mettre to?
J'ai de la chance que le devoir noté ait été reporté pour demain!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-10-2013 21:00
Réponse: Ville idéale/correction de lucile83, postée le 07-10-2013 à 21:02:51 (S | E)
Hello,
'Pour' dans le sens de 'dans le but de' se traduit par 'to/ in order to'.
Réponse: Ville idéale/correction de doctorfight, postée le 07-10-2013 à 22:01:54 (S | E)
OK merci beaucoup pour ton explication!
Passez une bonne soirée!
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