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Message de pichou39 posté le 13-10-2013 à 12:53:02 (S | E | F)
Hello,
I need someone correct my text please becausei don't I am not sure that my syntax is correct. I must defend a motion about admission to university.
In today's spciety, the problem of selection for higher education is an topic of debate. Some people thinks universities musn't free or just free for the best students. As for as i am concerned, Ithink everybody should be allowed to go to university without paying anything. Firstly, a student haven't got a wage and their parents may can not help him to pay tuitions fees or a grant so if we go to university without paying anything, it's satisfactory. Without this gratuity, students need to have a part time job to pay university's cost but studies require a lot of time, if we need a part time job on top of that, sudents can not be devote a hundred per cent oneself to study and they have not all chance to suceed. They musn't to allow to have crowded timetable because it's a source of tiredness, nervousness and academic failure. Then an university is public, it is for all people, all student have a chance ( poorer or richer), so it is normal that everybody go to university without paying anything and a grant is a source of stress.
Thank for your answers
Elisa
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-10-2013 14:21
Message de pichou39 posté le 13-10-2013 à 12:53:02 (S | E | F)
Hello,
I need someone correct my text please because
In today's spciety, the problem of selection for higher education is an topic of debate. Some people thinks universities musn't free or just free for the best students. As for as i am concerned, Ithink everybody should be allowed to go to university without paying anything. Firstly, a student haven't got a wage and their parents may can not help him to pay tuitions fees or a grant so if we go to university without paying anything, it's satisfactory. Without this gratuity, students need to have a part time job to pay university's cost but studies require a lot of time, if we need a part time job on top of that, sudents can not be devote a hundred per cent oneself to study and they have not all chance to suceed. They musn't to allow to have crowded timetable because it's a source of tiredness, nervousness and academic failure. Then an university is public, it is for all people, all student have a chance ( poorer or richer), so it is normal that everybody go to university without paying anything and a grant is a source of stress.
Thank for your answers
Elisa
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-10-2013 14:21
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