Synthèse/Places and forms of power
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Message de marie60 posté le 12-04-2014 à 18:18:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe le bac et je voudrais savoir si ma synthèse est bonne. POurriez-vous me corriger mes erreurs ( et elles doivent être nombreuses ^^ ) s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses !
I'm going to talk about the notion places and forms of power. It's a very intersting notion wich treats about many topics. That can deal of The places of institutions or the power in the history. But i prefer talk about a current theme , the power of the image into our society. Indeed, our society Gives more and more importance to the apparences. Thus We can wonder in what our image is a forms of power today.
Nowadays, the image is very important in our society. Our society attaches too much importance to cult of the body, the appearance, the beauty etc.. We just look the appearance, whitout want to know the inner beauty.
The women refer to what they see in the magazines, the TV and the fashion shows. The society imposes us a kind of very special beauty. Indeed, now The models who parade are tall and thin.
Indeed, one of the main preocupations in our society is the cult of the body, What implies a kind of ban of obesity and And also the overweight. In fashion show, we can see scrawny girls, who in spite of their age use the same size of pants as a 14-year-old girl and we will never see a big girl on a catwalk. And we have studied this year the case of Carla trujillo, a spanish model, who was excluded of the fashionweek of Madrid because she made a size 44.
Magazines also contribute to this cult. The pictures are modified in a way that the models appear the thinest possible. With the help of software, like photoshop, The professionals can change the model's size, remove the defects, thin her, the colour of the skin... Because of that, girls want look like them, and for that they make diets, And some of them become anorexic, and it's why it's dangerous. According to a investigation realized in 2002 with girls between 11 and 13 years old, there is 24% who say made a diet to lose weight, and 40% was already slim. These answers are worrying , because she give a lot of importance to their weight, even before the adolescence
We have to point out the fact that what we see in the magazines is not the reality.
It's not only in the magazines, it's in the TV too, with the presenters, they have to be beautiful too.
To resume, today, our society give a lot of importance about the apparences, the beauty, the The clothing style, and because of that, nowadays people can't stop think 'what they will say or think about that » I thing that the women with generous curves are more beautiful than the skinny models. Thus i want to say to all the girls not to change what they are. Real women have Sensual forms. So, the cult of the image can be bad, thus I think that it is important to raise public awareness especially the young people.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-04-2014 19:27
Message de marie60 posté le 12-04-2014 à 18:18:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe le bac et je voudrais savoir si ma synthèse est bonne. POurriez-vous me corriger mes erreurs ( et elles doivent être nombreuses ^^ ) s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses !
I'm going to talk about the notion places and forms of power. It's a very intersting notion wich treats about many topics. That can deal of The places of institutions or the power in the history. But i prefer talk about a current theme , the power of the image into our society. Indeed, our society Gives more and more importance to the apparences. Thus We can wonder in what our image is a forms of power today.
Nowadays, the image is very important in our society. Our society attaches too much importance to cult of the body, the appearance, the beauty etc.. We just look the appearance, whitout want to know the inner beauty.
The women refer to what they see in the magazines, the TV and the fashion shows. The society imposes us a kind of very special beauty. Indeed, now The models who parade are tall and thin.
Indeed, one of the main preocupations in our society is the cult of the body, What implies a kind of ban of obesity and And also the overweight. In fashion show, we can see scrawny girls, who in spite of their age use the same size of pants as a 14-year-old girl and we will never see a big girl on a catwalk. And we have studied this year the case of Carla trujillo, a spanish model, who was excluded of the fashionweek of Madrid because she made a size 44.
Magazines also contribute to this cult. The pictures are modified in a way that the models appear the thinest possible. With the help of software, like photoshop, The professionals can change the model's size, remove the defects, thin her, the colour of the skin... Because of that, girls want look like them, and for that they make diets, And some of them become anorexic, and it's why it's dangerous. According to a investigation realized in 2002 with girls between 11 and 13 years old, there is 24% who say made a diet to lose weight, and 40% was already slim. These answers are worrying , because she give a lot of importance to their weight, even before the adolescence
We have to point out the fact that what we see in the magazines is not the reality.
It's not only in the magazines, it's in the TV too, with the presenters, they have to be beautiful too.
To resume, today, our society give a lot of importance about the apparences, the beauty, the The clothing style, and because of that, nowadays people can't stop think 'what they will say or think about that » I thing that the women with generous curves are more beautiful than the skinny models. Thus i want to say to all the girls not to change what they are. Real women have Sensual forms. So, the cult of the image can be bad, thus I think that it is important to raise public awareness especially the young people.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-04-2014 19:27
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