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Message de leak143 posté le 10-01-2018 à 04:55:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour mesieurs/mesdames,
Je voudrais améliorer mes capacités, l'écrit, l'application des nouveaux mots, c'est pourquoi j'ai vous besoin à corriger mon texte. J'espère que vous allez m'aider pour augmenter mon apprentissage sur la langue anglai. Je vous remerci par avant.
At the week-end time, it is a good day for me. Because of from Monday to Friday, it is time for studying and has many homework from teacher at university. So that I have to complete my deputies, i lose my power and get tired.More important, at week-end i am able to refresh my brain like doing football, volley ball and other activities as well. Sometime I go for a walk with my dear friends to drive around the city. Additionally , it's the beautiful day for me , for my roommate, and my classmate too.
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Modifié par webmaster le 10-01-2018 08:00
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-01-2018 15:52
Message de leak143 posté le 10-01-2018 à 04:55:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour mesieurs/mesdames,
Je voudrais améliorer mes capacités, l'écrit, l'application des nouveaux mots, c'est pourquoi j'ai vous besoin à corriger mon texte. J'espère que vous allez m'aider pour augmenter mon apprentissage sur la langue anglai. Je vous remerci par avant.
At the week-end time, it is a good day for me. Because of from Monday to Friday, it is time for studying and has many homework from teacher at university. So that I have to complete my deputies, i lose my power and get tired.More important, at week-end i am able to refresh my brain like doing football, volley ball and other activities as well. Sometime I go for a walk with my dear friends to drive around the city. Additionally , it's the beautiful day for me , for my roommate, and my classmate too.
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Modifié par webmaster le 10-01-2018 08:00
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-01-2018 15:52
Réponse : Mon weekend/aide de laure95, postée le 10-01-2018 à 10:18:19 (S | E)
Bonjour,
At the week-end (en un seul mot) time (pas nécessaire), it is a good day (pas le bon mot: le weekend se compose de deux jours) for me. Because of (pas utile) from Monday to Friday, it is time for studying and has (faute de conjugaison + il manque le sujet)many (many + pluriel) homework from (mettre un possessif)teacher at university. So that I have to complete my deputies, i (majuscule) lose my power
and get tired.More important, at week-end i (majuscule)am able to refresh my brain like doing football (on dit "jouer au football"), volley ball and other activities as well. Sometime (orthographe) I go for a walk with my dear friends to drive around the city (à pied ou en voiture?). Additionally , it's the beautiful day for me , for my roommate (pluriel), and my classmate (pluriel)too. Réponse : Mon weekend/aide de leak143, postée le 10-01-2018 à 11:54:58 (S | E)
Bonjour laure95,
Je vous remerci beaucoup.
At the week-end , it is a good time for me. Because from Monday to Friday, it is time for studying and having many home-works from my teachers at university. So that I have to complete my deputies.This is the cause to lose my power and get tired.More important, at week-end I am able to refresh my brain like playing football, volley ball and other activities as well. Some time I go for a walk with my dear friends to drive around the city by motorbike. Additionally , it's the beautiful day for me , for my roommates, and my classmates too.
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