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Message de here4u posté le 25-02-2018 à 18:56:55 (S | E | F)
Hello, Dear Friends,

Voici de quoi vous réchauffer les méninges ... Aucun risque qu'elles gèlent ou se figent ! C'est garanti !
Merci d'aider mon pauvre élève qui fait pourtant beaucoup d'efforts. N'oubliez pas la ponctuation ... Il ne sait pas ce que c'est !

I) Please, help my student! He really needs you! He has tried to write a summary of an article he has just read, but I’m afraid there are « a few mistakes » left... Can you correct them for him, please? for you help.

on school just like building close when temps is to low they can be close when the temp are putting the kid ‘s wealth dangerous the old buildings contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes "heat days" canceling klas some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september ritcht the level to be a safty hasar a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrees = 35°C if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be abble to resist severals days of extrime hit close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside ceiling fans prooved air mouvment to do you fill coll.

II) Can you, please, reorder the words so as to make meaningful sentences… All the words must be used, none should be added!

1. BECOME / CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A/ WOULD/ ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO/ VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/ = 16 WORDS.

2. TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS/ AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE/ EARLY/ INSIDE/ FROM/ IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW / TEMPERATURES / = 23 WORDS.

3. DO/ REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/ WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGY/ COLD-BLOODED/ SAME/ AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND/ THE/ MUCH/ = 17 WORDS

Le corrigé de cet exercice sera online le mercredi 14 mars tard.
N'oubliez pas que vous pouvez "donner votre langue au chat" (pour un passage ou un autre) si une phrase vous agace trop !mais c'est un défi comme vous les aimez ! )

I give you THE FORCE.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-02-2018 20:58

ATTENTION ! UN MOT RAJOUTE (WOULD) ET UN MOT RETIRE (BE) EN "II)1" Sorry! Merci, Maxwell!

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de lucile83, postée le 02-03-2018 à 09:33:29 (S | E)
Hello,
Cet exercice vous attend depuis quelques jours

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 02-03-2018 à 11:41:38 (S | E)
Hello!
Ne t'inquiète pas ... ils fourbissent leurs armes et répartissent leurs efforts entre les trois invitations ... (L'exercice de traduction 127 est difficile et demande du temps !) C'est bien (et raisonnable ... ) de le laisser reposer et de s'amuser ici (ET AVEC OUR STORY!) pendant ce temps là ...
Don't forget : "All play and no work makes Jack a silly boy..." BUT "All work and no play makes Jack a DULL boy..." and who wants to be DULL?
Ne soyez pas "trop raisonnables" ... Pensez aussi à vous amuser !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de lucile83, postée le 02-03-2018 à 12:51:48 (S | E)
Ok I am too speedy

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de maxwell, postée le 03-03-2018 à 12:26:28 (S | E)
Hello
Je commence tout juste à regarder et je saute sur le 2e exercice qui est le plus amusant.
Dans le II)e exercice, 1re phrase, c'est bien "TOO" et non "TO" qu'il faut lire ?
Comme il y a le mot likely...

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 03-03-2018 à 12:38:50 (S | E)
Hello!
"Likely" ou pas, c'est bien "TOO" qu'il faut lire !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de maxwell, postée le 03-03-2018 à 12:59:43 (S | E)
ah
S'il ne manque pas au moins un "TO", la 1ère phrase est un pour moi

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 03-03-2018 à 14:31:12 (S | E)
Hello!
Désolée ... J'ai re-vérifié ... Il manquait un WOULD, et je dois rechercher le mot "en trop"(= BE) ... Mais pas d'accord pour une de plus ... Je ne joue pas la dévaluation des niveaux ! (Il n'y a "que" 16 mots ...) Si tu ne trouves pas, laisse reposer et lorsque tu reprendras, la solution va te sauter aux yeux comme une évidence !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de taiji43, postée le 03-03-2018 à 16:12:35 (S | E)
Hello Dear HERE4U
READY TO BE CORRECTED, SOMETMES I play AT RIDDLES

on school just like building close when temps is to low they can be close when the temp are putting the kid ‘s wealth dangerous the old buildings contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes "heat days" canceling klas some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september ritcht the level to be a safty hasar a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrees = 35°C if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be abble to resist severals days of extrime hit close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside ceiling fans prooved air mouvment to do you fill coll.

IN schoolS just AS IN building, THEY close when THE TEMPERATURE is TOO low, they can be CLOSED when the TEMPERATURES are putting the kid ‘s wealth IN DANGER .
The old buildings HELD BACK(retenir) the HEAT in any building WHEN the WINDOWS CAN’T be opened BY SEFATY PRECAUTIONS but SCHOOLS SELDOM take "heat days" CANCELLED CLASS
Far more(beaucoup plus de) TEACHERS BELIEVE, the temperature IN late September CAN REACH A level WHICH be a SAFETY HAZARD(être dangereux).

A SHORT report PUBLISHED on SOCIAL NETWORK DESCRIBING TEACHERS and kids SAID : THEY/HAD A HEADACHE and NOSEBLEED BY STAYING (en restant à l’école) in school because of ( DUE TO )THE HEAT: No AIR-CONDITIONNING VENTILATES( ventiler les étudiants students in the City and several SUBUB schoolS SO THAT THEY SHOULD NOT sweat (afin qu’ils ne transpirent pas)DURING THE lessons IN HIGH temperature SEASONS BEING IN THE UPPER (frôler) 95 degrees = 35°C

If your home is well isolated and SHADED, it IS CAPABLE OF RESISTING SEVERAL days of EXTREME HEAT
SINCE THE HEAT OF THE DAYSO, close THE doors, THE windows and THE CURTAINS WHICH WILL BE ABLE TO help the house TO REMAIN COLDER THAN OUTSIDE /FRESH, AND A ceiling fans WILL ABLE TO SUPPLY air MOUVEMENT SO THAT YOU FELT SOME FRESHNESS. (phrase remaniéee)

READY TO BE CORRECTED
1. BECOME / would/ CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A/ ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO/ VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/ = 16 WORDS

If during a heatwave, ininsulated homes are too closed up, they would likely become very hot
Si Durant une canicule, les maisons mal isolées sont trop fermées; elle deviendraient a probablement très chaudes

2. TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS/ AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE/ EARLY/ INSIDE/ FROM/ IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW / TEMPERATURES / = 23 WORDS.

I Know Is not the right solution , however it is mine a little shaky

If from early morning, to late afternoon; the temperature is inside the house, as beneficial as possible is opening overnight; temperatures fall below
Si depuis tôt le matin, l’après-midi jusqu’à tard dans l’après-midi la chaleur est à l’intérieur de la maison , aussi bénéfique que possible est d’ouvrir durant la nuit , les températures tombent plus bas

3. DO/ REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/ WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGY/ COLD-BLOODED/ SAME/ AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND/ THE/ MUCH/ = 17 WORDS
The Mammals and birds require much more energy and food than cold-blooded animals of the same weight
Les mammifères et les oiseaux ont besoin de plus de nourriture et d’énergie que les animaux à sang froid de même poids

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de maxwell, postée le 03-03-2018 à 16:14:18 (S | E)
Much easier that way!

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 03-03-2018 à 16:30:20 (S | E)
Hello!

Bon, d'accord ! Ce que je donne est trop facile ...

Edit: Bravo à la téméraire Taiji qui s'est jetée à l'eau avec courage even if she has felt like "playing a guessing game"! (Beware: to play = verbe régulier; ne pas confondre avec "to pay, I paid, paid= payer). Allez ... Bon courage à tous !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 04-03-2018 à 12:07:28 (S | E)
Hello!

Peut-être puis-je vous aider à aider mon "pauvre élève" ... Il me dit avoir voulu expliquer les difficultés et souffrances physiques imposées aux élèves pendant les "Heat Days" (qui ne sont pas exemptés de classe comme le sont les "Snow days"...) Life is unfair!

et dans la phrase 2, nous cherchons le moment optimal pour aérer une maison pendant une canicule ...

I hope that helped a little... If not, ask for other hints...

EDIT: II)2 commence par "Opening" et finit par "temperature". is that better?

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de vaiana, postée le 04-03-2018 à 12:14:25 (S | E)
Hello
I ~~don't arrive~~ can't manage to do the two exercises

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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-03-2018 14:48

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 04-03-2018 à 16:36:59 (S | E)
Hello vaiana,
I'm not really surprised since your co-workers (who have worked on this sort of exercises for weeks, months or even years...) are saying that this exercise is particularly difficult... I suggest you go and try to work on: Lien internet
Lien internet
Lien internet

They're easier and varied exercises, and you can be helped by "your friends' tries" and the "corrigés" which are at the end of each exercise.
I promise next exercise will be easier...

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de joe39, postée le 05-03-2018 à 12:47:55 (S | E)
Dear here4u,
Like an ordeal, this try was,
It made me sweat,
In spite of this chilly day.
On my version that,
You can find hereunder,
Ready to be corrected,
Anyway I bet…...

on school just like building close when temps is to low they can be close when the temp are putting the kid ‘s wealth dangerous the old buildings contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes "heat days" canceling klas some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september ritcht the level to be a safty hasar
a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrees = 35°C
if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be abble to resist severals days of extrime hit close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside ceiling fans prooved air mouvvment to do you fill coll
IN SCHOOLS ,just AS IN building , THEY close when THE TEMPERATURE is TOO low.
SO they can be CLOSED when TEMPERATURE IS putting the KIDS’ HEALTH IN DANGER. The old buildings contain the HEAT and in any building the WINDOWS CAN’T be opened for SAFETY PURPOSE. But SCHOOLS SELDOM TAKE “heat days”, CANCELLING CLASSES .Far more OFTEN THAN TEACHER BELIEVE, the temperature IN late SEPTEMBER REACHES SUCH A level SO AS to be a SAFETY HAZARD. A SHORT report, POSTED on SOCIAL NETWORK, DESCRIBES AS TEACHERS and KIDS have HEADHACHE and NOSEBLEED or
pass OUT AT school FOR OPPRESSIVE HEAT, DUE TO THE LACK OF AIRCONDITIONING. STUDENTS in the City and several SUBURB SCHOOLS,
SWEATING ALL OVER the lessons with SEASON HIGH temperature hovering
Around 95 Degree = 35° C.
If your HOUSE is well isolated and SHADY it COULD be ABLE to resist SEVERAL days of extreme HEAT. MOREOVER, TAKEN INTO CONSIDERATION the heat of the day, ceiling fans, MAKING air MOVE, SHOULD help the house to stay COLDER than outside AND MAKE you FEEL
COOL.

II) Can you, please, reorder the words so as to make meaningful sentences… All the words must be used, none should be added!
1. BECOME /WOULD/ CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A/ ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO/ VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/ = 16 WORDS.
Uninsulated homes, would likely become very hot during a heatwave, if they are closed up, too.

2. TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS/ AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE/ EARLY/ INSIDE/ FROM/ IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW / TEMPERATURES / = 23 WORDS.
As temperature is inside, opening house, if possible from late afternoon to early morning, is much beneficial, as the temperatures fall below overnight.

3. DO/ REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/ WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGY/ COLD-BLOODED/ SAME/ AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND/ THE/ MUCH/ = 17 WORDS
The mammals do require much more energy and food than birds and cold-blooded animals of same weight .
….Though not convinced too much.
Thank you very much for the demanding exercise.
I hope you have a great week.
So long
Joe 39

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de djim21, postée le 06-03-2018 à 12:43:15 (S | E)
Hello Here4u,
Waow ! How headache for me ! I'm going to buy "aspirine".
Have a nice week.
ready for correction
I) Please, help my student!
on school just like building close when temps is to low
they can be close when the temp are putting the kid ‘s wealth dangerous
the old buildings contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes "heat days" canceling klas
some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september ritcht the level to be a safty hasar
a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit
no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrees = 35°C
if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be abble to resist severals days of extrime hit
close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside
ceiling fans prooved air mouvment to do you fill coll.

SCHOOLS, just like BUILDINGS, CLOSE when temperature is TOO LOW.
THEY can be CLOSED when the TEMPERATURES are putting IN DANGER the KIDS’ HEALTH.
THE old buildings contain the HEAT and in any building the WINDOWS CAN’T be opened BY security but SELDOM SCHOOLS TAKE « HEAT days », canceling CLASS.
MOST OF TEACHERS DON’T BELIEVE the temperature IN late september REACHES a SAFETY LEVEL.
A little POSTED report on SOCIAL NETWORK HAS DESCRIBED TEACHERS and KIDS HAVING HEADACHE and NOSEBLEED or BEING ABSENT in school because of HEAT.
NO AIR CONDITIONING LEAVES STUDENTS in the CITY and several SUBURB SCHOOLS SWEATING DURING lessons BECAUSE OF THE HIGH TEMPERATURES OF THE SEASON OVERTAKING 95 degrees.
IF your home is well INSULATED and shadowed, it can be ABLE to resist SEVERAL EXTREME HEAT DAYS.
KEEPING CLOSED DOORS WINDOWS and CURTAINS AGAINST the HEAT of the day must help the house TO STAY COOLER THAN outside.
CEILING fans PRODUCE air MOVEMENTS to MAKE you FEEL COOL.

II) Can you, please, reorder the words so as to make meaningful sentences… All the words must be used, none should be added!

1. BECOME / CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A/ WOULD/ ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO/ VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/ = 16 WORDS.
During a heatwave up, if closed homes are too uninsulated, they would likely become very hot.

2. TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS/ AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE/ EARLY/ INSIDE/ FROM/ IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW / TEMPERATURES / = 23 WORDS.
As much as possible, if the overnight temperature is below temperatures inside, opening house from late afternoon to early morning is beneficial fall.

3. DO/ REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/ WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGY/ COLD-BLOODED/ SAME/ AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND/ THE/ MUCH/ = 17 WORDS
Birds and mammals do require much more energy and food than the cold-blooded animals of same weight.

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 07-03-2018 à 19:20:11 (S | E)
Hello !

Très bonne idée, Taiji, d'avoir tenté une traduction des phrases à remettre dans l'ordre ...

Allez, on se dépêche un peu ... Still waiting !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de magie8, postée le 07-03-2018 à 23:33:32 (S | E)
Hello all people

1) Help my student ready to correct
On school just like building close when temper is low they can be close when the temp are putting the kid"s wealth dangerous
The old building contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes"heat days"canceling klas
some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september richt the level to be a saty hasar
a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit
no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrés=35"c
if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be able to resist severals days of extrime hit
close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside
ceiling fans prooved air mouvment to do you fill coll.

SCHOOLS just AS BUIlDINGS close when TEMPERATURE is too low .They can be closed when the TEMPERATURE (or the WEATHER) IS putting the kid"S HEALTH in DANGER.
Old buildings RETAIN the HEAT and in any building the windows can not be opened for security but SELDOM SCHOOLS TAKE "heat days"CANCELLING CLASS.
Some far more TEACHERS DO NOT BELIEVE THAT the temperature late September REACHES the level OF BEING a SAFETY HAZARD.
A SHORT report POSTED on SOCIAL NETWORK DESCRIBING TEACHERS AND KIDS HAVING HEADACHE and NOSEBLEED or BEING ABSENT FROM school because of HEAT.
No air CONDITIONING LEAVES students in the city and in several SUBURB schools THEY SWEAT DURING THE COURSES with THE HIGH TEMPERATURE ON THE HEAT SEASON hovering around 95 DEGRES=35°C.
If your home is well INSULATED and SHADED it can be able to resist SEVERAL EXTREME HEAT DAYS .
Close DOORS, WINDOWS and CURTAINS AGAINST the HEAT of the day must help the house TO STAY COOLER THAN outside .
Ceiling fans PRODUCE air MOVEMENTS to GET you FEEL COOL.

bonjour
II) recorder the words ready to correct je n 'ai pas le temps de chercher mieux pour la phrase 2, je sens que je tourne autour mais c'est trop long je donne ma langue
1. BECOME/WOULD/CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A /ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO /VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/=16
WORds
During a heatwave if uninsulated homes are too closed up , they would likely become very hot
Pendant une vague de chaleur si les maisons pas isolé étaient trop fermées elles deviendraient probablement très chaudes .

2.TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS /AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE /EARLY/ INSIDE /FROM /IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW/ TEMPERATURES/ =23 Words

Opening the house as from late afternoon to early morning is much beneficial , as if is possible overnight temperature fall below inside temperatures .
ouvrir la maison dès la fin de l après midi jusque tôt le matin est trés bénéfique comme c' est possible que la température nocturne ecrase les temperatures intérieures .
3.DO / REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGIE/ COLD/ BLOODED /SAME /AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND /THE/ MUCH =17 mots
The mammals and birds do require much more energy and food than cold blooded animals of same weight.
Les mammifères et les oiseaux exigent beaucoup plus d'énergie et de nourriture que les animaux à sang froid du même poids
ME VOILA BIEN EPUISEE

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de chocolatcitron, postée le 08-03-2018 à 00:35:33 (S | E)
Hello my dear Here4u , and thanks a lot for this brain teaser ! FINISHED FOR THIS EXERCISE.

Here is my work:
Can you, please, reorder the words so as to make meaningful sentences… All the words must be used, none should be added!
1.BECOME / CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A/ WOULD/ ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO/ VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/ = 16 WORDS.
My first sentence:
IF CLOSED HOMES ARE TOO UNINSULATED, THEY WOULD BECOME VERY LIKELY HOT UP DURING A HEATWAVE. 16 words.
Si les maisons sont trop mal isolées, elles deviendraient très probablement des fournaises durant une canicule.

2. TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS/ AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE/ EARLY/ INSIDE/ FROM/ IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW / TEMPERATURES / = 23 WORDS.
My second sentence:
OPENING LATE AS OVERNIGHT AS EARLY MORNING IS MUCH BENEFICIAL TO THE INSIDE HOUSE TEMPERATURES IF IS POSSIBLE FALL BELOW FROM AFTERNOON TEMPERATURE. = 23 words.
L'ouverture tardive tant toute la nuit que tôt le matin est plus bénéfique aux températures internes de la maison, si c'est possible qu'elle tombe en dessous de la température de l'après-midi.

3. DO/ REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/ WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGY/ COLD-BLOODED/ SAME/ AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND/ THE/ MUCH/ = 17 WORDS
My third sentence:
MAMMALS AND BIRDS REQUIRE MUCH ENERGY AND MORE FOOD THAN DO COLD-BLOODED ANIMALS OF THE SAME WEIGHT.
Les mammifères et les oiseaux demandent plus d'énergie et plus de nourriture que n'ont besoin les animaux à sang froid de la même masse* (au même poids/ pour un poids équivalent).

* En langage scientifique, puis entre parenthèses, en langage courant.
See you soon !

Rack your Brains and Help/17 FINISHED FOR THIS EXERCISE TOO ! I don't have modified the first part, of course !

Hello, Dear Here4u ! Thank you, I wish I 've made no big mistakes, because his English is REALLY HORRIBLE and CATASTROPHIC ! He must really work harder... musn't he? He might be held back a year, and wear a wonderful dunce' scap, as in my first school year, bad students were wearing them !!!

Voici de quoi vous réchauffer les méninges ... Aucun risque qu'elles gèlent ou se figent ! C'est garanti !
Merci d'aider mon pauvre élève qui fait pourtant beaucoup d'efforts. N'oubliez pas la ponctuation ... Il ne sait pas ce que c'est ! Cela a bien chauffé, ça a même failli bouillir, c'est sûr !!!

I) Please, help my student! He really needs you! He has tried to write a summary of an article he has just read, but I’m afraid there are « a few mistakes » left... Can you correct them for him, please? for you help.

on school just like building close when temps is to low they can be close when the temp are putting the kid ‘s wealth dangerous the old buildings contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes "heat days" canceling klas some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september ritcht the level to be a safty hasar a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrees = 35°C if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be abble to resist severals days of extrime hit close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside ceiling fans prooved air mouvment to do you fill coll.

Here is my little help:
AT school, just AS BUILDINGS close when WE ARE AT LOW TEMPERATURE, they can be CLOSED when the TEMPERATURE risks the KIDS‘ HEALTH. THE DANGEROUS old buildings KEEP the HEAT and in any building the WINDOWS MUST NOT be opened for security. But school SELDOM TAKES « HEAT DAYS » CANCELLING CLASSES. AND THEN SOME TEACHERS BELIEVE the temperature IN THE VERY LAST DAYS OF SEPTEMBER REACHES the level to be a MERE COINCIDENCE... A FEW POSTED REPORTS on social NETWORK DESCRIBING TEACHERS and KIDS HAVING HEADACHES and NOSE BLOUD, or MISSING SCHOOL because of HEAT, no AIR-CONDITIONED, in lift STUDENTS in the city and sereral SUBURBS to SCHOOLS, ALL THAT MAKE to sweat ON with HIGH TEMPERATURE SEASON hovering AROUND 95°F equals 35°C. If your home is well INSULATED and shadowed it can resist SEVERAL days of EXTREME HEAT. CLOSE DOORS, WINDOWS and CURTAINS AS SOON AS the HEAT of the day must help the house FROM ROASTING. COOL OF that outside ceiling, BUT ALSO fans BRINGS DISPLACEMENT OF AIR to MAKE, so that you FEEL COOL DOWN.

And Here is my translation, about what I have undertstood:
A l'école, juste comme les immeubles ferment quand nous avons des températures basses, elles peuvent aussi être fermés quand les températures font courir des risques pour la santé des enfants. Les bâtiments vieux et dangereux retiennent la chaleur, et dans aucun immeuble, les fenêtres ne doivent pas rester ouvertes pour la sécurité. Mais l'école prend rarement cette décision les jours de canicule en fermant les classes. Et même quelques enseignants croient que les températures dans les tout derniers jours de septembre... comme un pur effet du hasard de rapports postés sur les réseaux sociaux décrivant les enseignants et les enfants avec des maux de tête, et des saignements de nez, ou manquant l'école à cause de la chaleur car pas d'air climatisé dans les ascenseurs scolaires de la Cité, et plusieurs écoles de banlieues, ce qui fait transpirer sur les leçons avec une température saisonnière caniculaire plafonnant aux alentours de 95°F soit 35°C. Si votre maison est bien isolée, et ombragée, il est possible de résister plusieurs jours de canicule. Fermez vos portes, fenêtres et rideaux, dès la chaleur du jour, peut aider la maison à ne pas devenir une fournaise… La fraîcheur du cellier extérieur, mais aussi les ventilateurs apportent un déplacement d'air qui fait que vous vous sentez rafraîchi(e)s.

VERY DIFFICULT BUT I DO LOVE IT, THANKS !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de icare29, postée le 08-03-2018 à 17:54:10 (S | E)
Hello Here4u and all hard workers here is my work ,OK FOR CORRECTION

on school just like building close when temps is to low they can be close when the temp are putting the kid ?s wealth dangerous the old buildings contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes "heat days" canceling klas some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september ritcht the level to be a safty hasar a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrees = 35°C if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be abble to resist severals days of extrime hit close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside ceiling fans prooved air mouvment to do you fill coll.

Schools , as buildings, are closed when external temperature is too low .They must be closed because in this condition kid's health are in danger .
Old buildings retain heat and in these buildings windows musn't be opened for safety reasons.
Classes are seldom cancelled during heat days .
Far more often than teachers believe ,temperature in late september can reach the safety hazard level.
A report posted in social network says that teachers and kids have headache and nosebleed or are not be present in school in reason of heat .
The lack of air-conditionning make students in city and suburb schools sweat during the time of lessons in classes because the temperature in this season can overtake 35°C .
If your home is well insulated and shaded, it will be able to resist extreme heat days for many days .
Keeping doors Windows and curtains closed against heat of the day can help house to stay cooler than outside .
Ceiling fans produce air movements to make you feel more confortable .

II) Can you, please, reorder the words

1. BECOME / CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A/ WOULD/ ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO/ VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/ = 16 WORDS.
if uninsulated homes are too closed up during a heatwave they would likely become very hot

2. TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS/ AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE/ EARLY/ INSIDE/ FROM/ IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW / TEMPERATURES / = 23 WORDS.
if house is opening as much as possible from late afternoon to early morning, overnight temperature below inside temperature , the fall is beneficial .

3. DO/ REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/ WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGY/ COLD-BLOODED/ SAME/ AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND/ THE/ MUCH/ = 17 WORDS
Birds and mammals do require much more energy and food than the cold-blooded animals of same weight..

Thank you very much for your good exercise, so difficult but so motivating....

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 09-03-2018 à 11:06:21 (S | E)
Hello!
A cause de problèmes d'ordinateur (encore sous garantie...) je crains d'en être privée bientôt ... J'ai donc commencé les transferts de corrections très (trop ) tôt, cette fois-ci ... Je fais des sauvegardes et fais mon possible pour que tout se passe sans incidents ... SORRY !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de tereda, postée le 09-03-2018 à 11:42:28 (S | E)
hello everyone,
thank you HERE4U for this new exercise,

I prefer not to give you the second one, I have not used all the words....

I) Please, help my student! He really needs you!

SCHOOLS, just AS BUILDINGS ARE closeD when temperatures ARE too low, they can be closeD when the temperatureS are putting the kid ‘s health IN DANGER ; the old buildings RETAIN the HEAT and in Many buildingS the windowS can't be opened for security, but schools seldom take "heat days" for canceling CLASSes.
Sometime, far more Teachers THINK the temperatures in late September REACH the level to be a SAFETY HASARD ; a SHORT POSTED report on social network describes teacher and kid HAVING HEADACHE AND NOSEBLEEDS or passing off school because OF HAVING NO AIR CONDITIONING ; students in the City and several suburb schools SWEATING DURING LESSONS with SEASON HIGH temperatures over around 95 degrees = 35°C : If your house is well isolated and IN THE SHADE, it COULD be able to resist SEVERAL days of EXTREME HEAT ; door, windows and curtains closed since the HEAT OF THE DAY can help the house to stay COLD. And outside ceiling fans can GIVE AIR MOVEMENT to make YOU FEEL COOL.

Les écoles, tout comme les bâtiments sont fermés lorsque les températures sont trop basses, elles peuvent être fermées lorsque les températures mettent la santé des enfants en danger; Les bâtiments anciens retiennent la chaleur et dans beaucoup de bâtiments, les fenêtres ne peuvent pas être ouvertes pour des raisons de sécurité, mais les écoles prennent rarement des «jours de chaleur» pour annuler les classes.

Parfois, beaucoup plus de professeurs pensent que les températures à la fin de septembre atteignent un niveau comme étant un risque pour la sécurité; un court rapport posté sur un réseau social décrit un enseignant et un enfant ayant des maux de tête et des saignements de nez ou qui ont quitté l'école parce qu'ils n'avaient pas de climatisation; les étudiants de la ville et de plusieurs écoles de banlieue transpirent pendant les cours avec des températures élevées autour de 95 degrés = 35 ° C:

Si votre maison est bien isolée et à l'ombre, elle peut résister à plusieurs jours de chaleur extrême; La porte, les fenêtres et les rideaux fermés avant la chaleur du jour peuvent aider la maison à rester froide. Et les ventilateurs de plafond extérieurs peuvent donner un mouvement d'air pour vous rafraîchir.

ready to be corrected, thank you

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de alpiem, postée le 10-03-2018 à 15:51:07 (S | E)
hello, Hello,some trouble with this tranlation, only snatches

on school just like building close when temps is to low they can be close when the temp are putting the kid ‘s wealth dangerous the old buildings contain the hot and in any building the window cant be opened for security but school sell dome takes "heat days" CANCELLING klas some far more titcher beleive the temperature late september ritcht the level to be a safty hasar a little postid report on socialnetwork dscribing titcher and kid have headake and nozeblids or passing in school because of hit no airconditionnin lift student in the City and several subburb school to sweat across lessons with seazon height temperature hovering around 95 degrees = 35°C if your home is well isolated and shadowed it can be abble to resist severals days of extrime hit close door window and curten since the hit of the day must help the house tostaying colle that outside ceiling fans prooved air mouvment to do you fill coll.

Schools just like buildings ARE CLOSED when THE TEMPERATURE is too low, they can be CLOSED when the TEMPERATURES are putting the
KIDS'HELTH AT RISK. Old buildings RETAIN the HEAT and in EVERY building the windows CAN be opened OUT OF security. But SCHOOLS SELDOM
ALLOW "HOT days" CANCELLINGS FOR FAR MORE TEACHERS BELIEVE THAT THE LAST SEPTEMBRE REACHED THE LEVEL for more TEACHERS and kids have headACHES and nose BLEEDINGS

II) Can you, please, reorder the words so as to make meaningful sentences… All the words must be used, none should be added!

1. BECOME / CLOSED/ LIKELY/ HOT/ UNINSULATED/ UP/ A/ WOULD/ ARE/ DURING/ IF/ TOO/ VERY/ HEATWAVE/ HOMES/ THEY/ = 16 WORDS.
If they are closed up during a heat wave, uninsulated homes would likely become very hot.
2. TEMPERATURE/ MORNING/ OVERNIGHT/ POSSIBLE/ AFTERNOON/ HOUSE/ AS/ AS/ TO/ IS/ THE/ LATE/ EARLY/ INSIDE/ FROM/ IS/ IF/ FALL/ OPENING/ MUCH/ BENEFICIAL/ BELOW / TEMPERATURES / = 23 WORDS.
Openning the house from late afternoon to early morning is as much beneficial as possible if inside temperatures fall overnight below
temperature.
3. DO/ REQUIRE/ FOOD/ THAN/ WEIGHT/ MAMMALS/ ANIMALS/ BIRDS/ ENERGY/ COLD-BLOODED/ SAME/ AND/ MORE/ OF/ AND/ THE/ MUCH/ = 17 WORDS
Mamals and birds do require much more food and energy than cold-blooded animals of the same weight=17

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de maxwell, postée le 13-03-2018 à 20:36:35 (S | E)
FINISHED

Hello Here4U
but I must say that this is the hardest exercise I've ever worked on! I think it would have been less difficult with the correct punctuation. Anyway, I did what I could...

I) Help my student:

AT school[,] just AS OTHER PUBLIC BUILDINGS ARE CLOSED when THE TEMPERATURES ARE TOO low[,] IT can be CLOSED when the TEMPERATURES are putting the KIDS' HEALTH IN JEOPARDY[.]

[] Old buildings RETAIN the HEAT and in MANY BUILDINGS[,] the WINDOWS CAN'T be opened for security REASONS but school SELDOM takes "heat days" OFF[,] CANCELLING CLASS [.]

FURTHERMORE, some TEACHERS BELIEVE THAT the temperature IN late september HAS REACHED the level to be a SAFETY HAZARD[.]

A SHORT REPORT POSTED on SOCIAL NETWORKS DESCRIBED TEACHERS and KIDS HAVING HEADACHES and NOSEBLEEDS or passing in school because of HEAT[!]
[N]o AIR CONDITIONING HAS MADE STUDENTS in the City and several SUBURBAN SCHOOLS [] sweat THROUGH lessons with A SEASON'S HIGH temperature hovering AT around 95 degrees = 35°C[...]

BUT if your home is well isolated and SHADY[,] it MAY be ABLE to resist SEVERAL days of EXTREME HEAT [:]

CLOSING DOORS, WINDOWS and CURTAINS since the BEGINNING OF THE HEAT of the day SHOULD help the house STAY COOL AND OUTDOOR ceiling fans SHOULD PROVIDE air MOVEMENT to MAKE you FEEL COOL.

II) Reorder the words:
1) during a too hot heatwave, homes would very likely become closed up if they are uninsulated

3) mammals and birds require much more food and energy than cold-blooded animals of the same weight do.

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 14-03-2018 à 19:36:50 (S | E)
Hello! Dearest Friends ...

APPEL à VOLONTAIRES: 2 pour traduire le texte corrigé de "mon élève" à se partager par "moitié" et un (ou deux, au choix) pour traduire les 3 phrases. à eux ...

Sorry I asked so much from you… I’ll try not to do it again (so much… )
Yet, your results were all the more satisfactory as you have, as usual, given me your best...
You're real champs and I congratulate all of you...

I) Please, help my student! He really needs you! Correction :

In schools, just as (1) buildings are closed when temps are too low they can be closed when the temps are putting the kids' health (2) in danger. The old buildings contain the heat and in some buildings the windows can't be opened for security. But schools seldom take "heat days", cancelling classes.
Some former (3) teachers believe the temperatures late September reached the level of being a safety hazard. A few posted reports on social networks describing teachers and kids having headaches and nosebleeds (4), or passing out (5) in schools because of the heat. No air conditioning left students in the city and several suburban schools sweating through lessons, with unseasonably high temperatures hovering around 95 degrees.
If your home is well insulated (6) and shaded, it should be able to resist several days of extreme heat. Closing doors, windows and curtains during the heat of the day can help the house stay cooler than outside. Ceiling fans (7) provide air movement to make you feel cooler.

(1) = just as = de même que
(2) Ne pas confondre, comme mon élève, « health » (la santé) et « wealth » (la richesse).
(3) "Former teachers" = "anciens"(précédents) professeurs ; ne les transformez pas, malgré eux en « farmers » …
(4) Headaches et nosebleeds : un seul nez et une seule tête, mais l'emploi du « pluriel concret » impose les pluriels.
(5) To pass out = to faint.
(6) Ne pas confondre « to insulate » = isoler (avec de l’isolation) et « to isolate » isoler au sens de solitude.
(7) A fan = pas seulement un « fan »= amateur de …, mais aussi un ventilateur !

II) Can you, please, reorder the words so as to make meaningful sentences… All the words must be used, none should be added!

1) If uninsulated homes are closed up during a heatwave they would/ will very likely become too hot.
2) Opening the house as much as possible from late afternoon to early morning is beneficial if overnight temperatures fall below the inside temperature.
3) Mammals and birds require much more food and energy than do cold-blooded animals of the same weight.

Ca parait simple, comme ça, lorsque les réponses sont là ... non ? Sorry again !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 16-03-2018 à 09:11:39 (S | E)
Hello!

On n'oublie pas mes appels à volontaires pour le follow-up work...

This thread isn't closed... It needs you! Chop-chop...

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de chocolatcitron, postée le 16-03-2018 à 14:51:16 (S | E)
Bonjour !
Here4u, je suis volontaire, afin de te libérer l'esprit pour d'autres pages qui t'attendent déjà !

Voici le texte et sa traduction :

In schools, just as (1) buildings are closed when temps are too low they can be closed when the temps are putting the kids' health (2) in danger. The old buildings contain the heat and in some buildings the windows can't be opened for security. But schools seldom take "heat days", cancelling classes.
Some former (3) teachers believe the temperatures late September reached the level of being a safety hazard. A few posted reports on social networks describing teachers and kids having headaches and nosebleeds (4), or passing out (5) in schools because of the heat. No air conditioning left students in the city and several suburban schools sweating through lessons, with unseasonably high temperatures hovering around 95 degrees.
If your home is well insulated (6) and shaded, it should be able to resist several days of extreme heat. Closing doors, windows and curtains during the heat of the day can help the house stay cooler than outside. Ceiling fans (7) provide air movement to make you feel cooler.

Les écoles, de même que les immeubles sont fermés quand les températures sont trop basses ils peuvent être fermés quand les températures mettent la santé des enfants en danger. Les vieux immeubles retiennent la chaleur et dans des bâtiments scolaires, les fenêtres ne sont pas ouvertes par sécurité. Mais les écoles annulent rarement les cours durant les journées caniculaires.
D'anciens professeurs croient que les températures de septembre dernier ont atteint un niveau un niveau suffisant pour mettre la santé en péril. Quelques rapports postés sur les réseaux sociaux, décrivent des enseignants et des enfants avec des maux de tête et des saignements de nez, ou perdant connaissance pour cause de chaleur. L'absence d'air conditionné fait transpirer les élèves en ville, et dans plusieurs écoles de banlieues sous des températures, hors saison, élevées atteignant les alentours de 95°F.
Si votre maison est bien isolée, et ombragée, il devrait être possible de résister plusieurs jours caniculaires. Fermer les portes, les fenêtres et les rideaux, durant la chaleur diurne, peut aider la maison à rester plus fraîche que dehors. Les ventilateurs de plafonds procurent un mouvement d'air qui fait que vous vous sentez rafraîchi.

Voici les traductions des trois phrases :

If uninsulated homes are closed up during a heatwave they would/ will very likely become too hot.

Si les maisons mal isolées sont fermées durant une vague de chaleur, elles deviendront très probablement trop chaudes.

Opening the house as much as possible from late afternoon to early morning is beneficial if overnight temperatures fall below the inside temperature.

Aérer les maisons autant que possible en fin d'après-midi jusqu'aux aurores est bénéfique si les températures nocturnes descendent en-dessous de la température intérieure.

Mammals and birds require much more food and energy than do cold-blooded animals of the same weight.

Les mammifères et les oiseaux ont besoin de plus de nourriture et d'énergie que les animaux à sang froid de même poids.

Merci pour tes corrections étudiées très attentivement...
Bonne journée !

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de tereda, postée le 16-03-2018 à 16:37:27 (S | E)
merci CHOCOLAT CITRON pour tes traductions.

Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/17 de here4u, postée le 16-03-2018 à 19:16:13 (S | E)
hello, All of You!
hello Choco!

Quelques ajustements minimes ... Excellent travail, Choco !

De même que les immeubles sont fermés quand les températures sont trop basses, les écoles peuvent être fermées quand les températures mettent la santé des enfants en danger. Les vieux immeubles retiennent la chaleur et dans des bâtiments scolaires, on ne peut pas ouvrir les fenêtres par mesure de sécurité. Mais les écoles suppriment rarement les cours durant les journées caniculaires.
D'anciens professeurs croient que les températures de septembre dernier ont atteint un niveau suffisant pour mettre la santé en péril. Quelques rapports postés sur les réseaux sociaux, décrivent des enseignants et des enfants avec des maux de tête et des saignements de nez, ou perdant connaissance à cause de la chaleur. L'absence d'air conditionné fait transpirer les élèves en ville, et dans des écoles de banlieues sous des températures, hors saison, élevées atteignant les alentours de 95°F.
Si votre maison est bien isolée, et ombragée, il devrait être possible de résister à plusieurs jours de canicule. Fermer les portes, les fenêtres et les rideaux, durant la chaleur diurne, peut aider la maison à rester plus fraîche que dehors. Des ventilateurs aux plafonds procurent un mouvement d'air qui fait que vous vous sentez rafraîchi.

Sentences:
If uninsulated homes are closed up during a heatwave they would/ will very likely become too hot.
Si des maisons mal isolées sont fermées durant une vague de chaleur, elles deviendront très probablement trop chaudes.

Opening the house as much as possible from late afternoon to early morning is beneficial if overnight temperatures fall below the inside temperature.
Aérer les maisons autant que possible en début de soirée jusqu'aux aurores est bénéfique si les températures nocturnes descendent en-dessous de la température intérieure.

Mammals and birds require much more food and energy than do cold-blooded animals of the same weight.
Les mammifères et les oiseaux ont besoin de plus de nourriture et d'énergie que les animaux à sang froid de même poids.

Toute l'équipe te remercie de cet excellent travail, Choco ! Bravo

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