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Message de chloehuit posté le 17-04-2019 à 13:48:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis actuellement en terminales S et je souhaiterais une correction de ma synthèse sur la notion espace et échanges. Merci pour votre aide.
Cordialement
To introduce the notion "spaces and exchanges", I will gave a definition: This notion is about the geographical and virtual across in which all societies live. It also about the interactions between societies and between men within these societies. Our world has been and it still built around the exploration and the conquest of now spaces cultural, linguistic, economical, sociological interactions have shaped the world as we know it today. My question will be emigrate a deceptive path?
In order to answer this question I will use the documents we studied about the illegal Latino migration to the US.
To begin with, since 1965, legal migration to the USA has been illegal, so migrants had to cross the borders illegally. Migrants come from Central America, South America and migrate to the US for various reasons for example: poverty, economic difficulties, civil war, dictatorship, gang violence Nicaragua Venezuela. We can say that the USA are a magnet for the migrants. Because, for the migrants the USA represents a dream. And they move to the USA in order to get a better life they hope to have a well paid job, material comfort, health facilities, security, protection.
Secondly, how does a migrants cross borders? With the video “a trip to hell”. The border is easy to cross. Migrants cross the border enter Mexico and the USA by el Rio Grande. Because there isn’t a lot of water but there is nasty creatures: snakes or spiders. Yet, there is smugglers who gets money to help migrants cross the borders illegally. But, of migrants are lost, they can find themselves in serious trouble because Mexican police discovered hundreds of unidentified bodies at the border.
Finally, how does a migrant integrate the USA? After crossing the border, illegal migrants find a job, often an unskilled one. They also have to hide from authorities because they are undocumented. In 2015, President Obama launched the Daca program ( integration of young illegal migrants) but the new president cut it down. Migrant do hard, back-breaking, low paid jobs that American people don't want to do. When they get older, some migrants stay forever in the USA but more retire in Mexico.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-04-2019 15:49
Message de chloehuit posté le 17-04-2019 à 13:48:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis actuellement en terminales S et je souhaiterais une correction de ma synthèse sur la notion espace et échanges. Merci pour votre aide.
Cordialement
To introduce the notion "spaces and exchanges", I will gave a definition: This notion is about the geographical and virtual across in which all societies live. It also about the interactions between societies and between men within these societies. Our world has been and it still built around the exploration and the conquest of now spaces cultural, linguistic, economical, sociological interactions have shaped the world as we know it today. My question will be emigrate a deceptive path?
In order to answer this question I will use the documents we studied about the illegal Latino migration to the US.
To begin with, since 1965, legal migration to the USA has been illegal, so migrants had to cross the borders illegally. Migrants come from Central America, South America and migrate to the US for various reasons for example: poverty, economic difficulties, civil war, dictatorship, gang violence Nicaragua Venezuela. We can say that the USA are a magnet for the migrants. Because, for the migrants the USA represents a dream. And they move to the USA in order to get a better life they hope to have a well paid job, material comfort, health facilities, security, protection.
Secondly, how does a migrants cross borders? With the video “a trip to hell”. The border is easy to cross. Migrants cross the border enter Mexico and the USA by el Rio Grande. Because there isn’t a lot of water but there is nasty creatures: snakes or spiders. Yet, there is smugglers who gets money to help migrants cross the borders illegally. But, of migrants are lost, they can find themselves in serious trouble because Mexican police discovered hundreds of unidentified bodies at the border.
Finally, how does a migrant integrate the USA? After crossing the border, illegal migrants find a job, often an unskilled one. They also have to hide from authorities because they are undocumented. In 2015, President Obama launched the Daca program ( integration of young illegal migrants) but the new president cut it down. Migrant do hard, back-breaking, low paid jobs that American people don't want to do. When they get older, some migrants stay forever in the USA but more retire in Mexico.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-04-2019 15:49
Réponse : Notion/Spaces and exchanges de laure95, postée le 17-04-2019 à 17:58:42 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- I will gave a definition:will + infinitif.
- This notion is about the geographical and virtual (il manque un mot)across in which all societies live.
- It (verbe ?)also about the interactions
- Our world has been and it (it ?)still built around the exploration
- now
spaces- My question will be emigrate a deceptive path? : ?
- so migrants had (mettre au présent)to cross the borders illegally.
- Secondly, how does (pluriel) a (pas de a)migrants cross borders?
- enter
Mexico and the USA by el Rio Grande.- there is nasty creatures: there is + singulier.
- there is smugglers (même remarque)who gets (faute de conjugaison) money to help migrants (préposition)cross the borders
- of
migrants are lost, - (article) Mexican police discovered hundreds of unidentified bodies at the border.
- Migrant do hard, back-breaking, low paid jobs: ?
- more retire
in Mexico.Pas de conclusion?
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