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Message de sab1907 posté le 02-11-2019 à 16:12:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je reprends des cours d’anglais en autodidacte. Pour m’aider, je lis des livres en anglais avec des niveaux croissants de difficulté. J’en ai écrit les résumés à chaque fois mais je ne trouve pas d’aide pour les corriger. Certains remontent à quelques mois. Mais vaut mieux tard que jamais.
Si quelqu’un/une veut bien m’aider je suis preneuse. Ci-dessous le premier.
Merci pour votre aide.
The story started in France in 1661. It’s talking about the King of France, the musketeers, a secret prisoner and a plot.
Aramis was the Bishop of Vannes. He went to the Bastille prison for meet a special prisoner. This prisoner was in prison since eight years. His name was Philippe and he told about his life to Aramis.
He spent his childhood in a small house with a teacher and a nurse.
He had the visit of a Lady every month. One day, some soldiers arrived and arrested Philippe.
Aramis told to Philippe that the soldiers killed his teacher and his nurse.
Aramis explained that the Queen Ann gave birth twins. Louis and Philippe.
But the King should choose a baby to become the future King of France. He hid Philippe in the house with a teacher and a nurse. He kept Louis with him.
But Louis became a bad King. He spent a lot of money in wars and feasts. Aramis planned a plot to reverse Louis and Philippe. He asked some help on his friend Porthos. Aramis and Porthos were Musketeers some years ago.
In Paris, the chief Minister of finance was Fouquet. He organized a big feast for the King in his house at Vaux. He invited Aramis, Porthos, the King and more people.
The King was protected by the musketeers. Their captain was D’Artagnan. D’Artagnan was a friend of Aramis and Porthos.
At Vaux, Philippe learned to imitate the King to take his place. In the night, Aramis and Porthos kidnapped the King. They brought the King in the Bastille. Philippe took his place in the bedroom at Vaux.
But the next day, Fouquet realized it. He went to the Bastille to deliver the real King.
Aramis and Porthos escaped to Belle-Ile. Louis returned at Vaux. He arrested his Brother and sent him at Ile Ste Marguerite. He asked to cover the Philippe’s face with an Iron Mask. The king also asked to D’Artagnan to kill his friend, Porthos and Aramis. After a battle on Belle-Ile, Porthos died. Aramis escaped to Spain. D’Artagnan stayed with the King, the captain of Musketeers.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2019 16:24
Message de sab1907 posté le 02-11-2019 à 16:12:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je reprends des cours d’anglais en autodidacte. Pour m’aider, je lis des livres en anglais avec des niveaux croissants de difficulté. J’en ai écrit les résumés à chaque fois mais je ne trouve pas d’aide pour les corriger. Certains remontent à quelques mois. Mais vaut mieux tard que jamais.
Si quelqu’un/une veut bien m’aider je suis preneuse. Ci-dessous le premier.
Merci pour votre aide.
The story started in France in 1661. It’s talking about the King of France, the musketeers, a secret prisoner and a plot.
Aramis was the Bishop of Vannes. He went to the Bastille prison for meet a special prisoner. This prisoner was in prison since eight years. His name was Philippe and he told about his life to Aramis.
He spent his childhood in a small house with a teacher and a nurse.
He had the visit of a Lady every month. One day, some soldiers arrived and arrested Philippe.
Aramis told to Philippe that the soldiers killed his teacher and his nurse.
Aramis explained that the Queen Ann gave birth twins. Louis and Philippe.
But the King should choose a baby to become the future King of France. He hid Philippe in the house with a teacher and a nurse. He kept Louis with him.
But Louis became a bad King. He spent a lot of money in wars and feasts. Aramis planned a plot to reverse Louis and Philippe. He asked some help on his friend Porthos. Aramis and Porthos were Musketeers some years ago.
In Paris, the chief Minister of finance was Fouquet. He organized a big feast for the King in his house at Vaux. He invited Aramis, Porthos, the King and more people.
The King was protected by the musketeers. Their captain was D’Artagnan. D’Artagnan was a friend of Aramis and Porthos.
At Vaux, Philippe learned to imitate the King to take his place. In the night, Aramis and Porthos kidnapped the King. They brought the King in the Bastille. Philippe took his place in the bedroom at Vaux.
But the next day, Fouquet realized it. He went to the Bastille to deliver the real King.
Aramis and Porthos escaped to Belle-Ile. Louis returned at Vaux. He arrested his Brother and sent him at Ile Ste Marguerite. He asked to cover the Philippe’s face with an Iron Mask. The king also asked to D’Artagnan to kill his friend, Porthos and Aramis. After a battle on Belle-Ile, Porthos died. Aramis escaped to Spain. D’Artagnan stayed with the King, the captain of Musketeers.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2019 16:24
Réponse : Correction/Résumés de here4u, postée le 02-11-2019 à 21:57:22 (S | E)
Hello!
The story started in France in 1661. It’s talking about the King of France, the musketeers, a secret prisoner and a plot.
Aramis was the Bishop of Vannes. He went to the Bastille prison for meet a special prisoner. This prisoner was in prison since eight years. (revoir la différence entre for/ since/ ago/ N°108718.
Lien internet
) His name was Philippe and he told Aramis about his life
He spent his childhood in a small house with a teacher and a nurse.
He had the visit of a Lady every month. One day, some soldiers arrived and arrested Philippe.
Aramis told to Philippe that the soldiers XXX killed (temps!) his teacher and his nurse.
Aramis explained that the Queen Ann XXX gave birth twins. Louis and Philippe.(Il est question d'actions antérieurs à la narration ! )
But the King should choose a baby to become the future King of France. He hid Philippe in the house with a teacher and a nurse. He kept Louis with him.
But Louis became a bad King. He spent a lot of money in wars and feasts. Aramis planned a plot to reverse (Lien internet
Louis and Philippe. He asked some help on his friend Porthos. Aramis and Porthos were Musketeers some years ago.(encore des actions antérieures !)
In Paris, the chief Minister of finance was Fouquet. He organized a big feast for the King in his house at Vaux. He invited Aramis, Porthos, the King and more people.
The King was protected by the musketeers. Their captain was D’Artagnan. D’Artagnan was a friend of Aramis and Porthos.
At Vaux, Philippe learned to imitate the King to take his place. In the night, Aramis and Porthos kidnapped the King. They brought the King inXX the Bastille. Philippe took his place in the bedroom at Vaux.
But the next day, Fouquet realized it. He went to the Bastille to deliver the real King.
Aramis and Porthos escaped to Belle-Ile. Louis returned at Vaux. He arrested his Brother and sent him at Ile Ste Marguerite. He asked to cover the Philippe’s face with an Iron Mask. The king also asked to D’Artagnan to kill his friendS, Porthos and Aramis. After a battle on Belle-Ile, Porthos died. Aramis escaped to Spain. D’Artagnan stayed with the King, the captain of Musketeers.
Réponse : Correction/Résumés de sab1907, postée le 07-11-2019 à 19:38:18 (S | E)
Merci pour les corrections 👍
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