Introduction/dissertation
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Message de lenastyler posté le 07-11-2019 à 18:24:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurai bientôt une rédaction type dissertation en anglais et pour m'entraîner , j'ai essayé de faire une introduction en anglais.
Merci de me corriger tout en m'expliquant l'erreur s'il vous plait.
Who doesn't know Lady Gaga? Nobody. Peoples know some singers without heard one of them. Music is a popular art. It is everywhere: in the car, in the shop, in the radio... But how can music gather people ? How this art can make people being able to understand feelings of one another ? To answer this question, we will broach the message, which music can transmit. Then we will wonder how music can represent a culture. After we will interest to the self improvement that music can make in people.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2019 21:11
Message de lenastyler posté le 07-11-2019 à 18:24:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurai bientôt une rédaction type dissertation en anglais et pour m'entraîner , j'ai essayé de faire une introduction en anglais.
Merci de me corriger tout en m'expliquant l'erreur s'il vous plait.
Who doesn't know Lady Gaga? Nobody. Peoples know some singers without heard one of them. Music is a popular art. It is everywhere: in the car, in the shop, in the radio... But how can music gather people ? How this art can make people being able to understand feelings of one another ? To answer this question, we will broach the message, which music can transmit. Then we will wonder how music can represent a culture. After we will interest to the self improvement that music can make in people.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2019 21:11
Réponse : Introduction/dissertation de laure95, postée le 14-11-2019 à 17:02:20 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Who doesn't know Lady Gaga? Nobody. Peoples (people est déjà un mot au pluriel) know some singers without heard (without + verbe + -ing)one of them. Music is a popular art. It is (present)everywhere: in the car (pluriel), in the shop (pluriel), in the radio (on ne dit pas "dans la radio")... But how can music gather people ? How this art can make people being able to understand feelings of one another ? (ordre des mots)To answer this question, we will broach the message, which music can transmit. Then we will wonder how music can represent a (pas de a)culture. After we will interest to (focus on ?)the self improvement that music can make in people.
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