Correction WSS/ conclusion
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Message de holaquetal posté le 27-06-2021 à 18:49:25 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
voici la conclusion de mon devoir.
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
To conclude, the rewriting permits to develop Rochester’s point of view. The travel provokes the introspection of Rochester. We have access to his feelings and thoughts. It gave a voice to Rochester, and we can understand his perspective on the marriage with Antoinette. The nature is very important to express his feelings, in fact there is a connection and Rochester can explain it thanks to the reflection. Nature is also important because it send different signs to advert Rochester about the future with Antoinette.
Message de holaquetal posté le 27-06-2021 à 18:49:25 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
voici la conclusion de mon devoir.
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
To conclude, the rewriting permits to develop Rochester’s point of view. The travel provokes the introspection of Rochester. We have access to his feelings and thoughts. It gave a voice to Rochester, and we can understand his perspective on the marriage with Antoinette. The nature is very important to express his feelings, in fact there is a connection and Rochester can explain it thanks to the reflection. Nature is also important because it send different signs to advert Rochester about the future with Antoinette.
Réponse : Correction WSS/ conclusion de gerold, postée le 29-06-2021 à 11:19:35 (S | E)
To conclude, the rewriting permits to develop Rochester’s point of view. The travel provokes the introspection of Rochester R.'s introspection. We have access to his feelings and thoughts. It gave présent a voice to Rochester, and we can understand his perspective on the marriage with to (plus courant en anglais moderne) Antoinette.
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