Playing with words/45

Playing with words/45
Message de here4u posté le 05-07-2023 à 23:32:29 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici votre nouveau challenge ! "Playing and working with words"... La date limite pour cet exercice est fin juillet 2023.
Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu... mais il peut être très ludique... Il vous laisse également toute liberté de choisir votre thème!

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it? (In fact, it's more easily said than done and advanced learners or natives can step in!! )

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS! [and specify the number of words at the end.]

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin.) Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte... Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne devez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
Pour que chacun ait la possibilité de travailler avec nous, cet exercice a des niveaux différents. Vous pouvez choisir celui qui vous convient :
Le niveau fera une seule phrase en moins de 80 mots.
Le niveau une seule phrase et toujours 60 mots, au plus.
Le niveau **, pour les plus habiles, fera une phrase de moins de 40 mots ...
I'm sure you'll have inspiration...

Here are the words:

- To INQUIRE – To GAZE – a LETTER - DEFENCELESSNESS – VIOLENT – NUMB – YET – AFTER ALL + un comparatif d'inégalité.

Lien internet
(paragraphe 1)

C'est parti pour une " très jolie phrase correcte et courte ! "
May THE FORCE be with all of us! ... HAVE A GREAT HOLIDAY!

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Réponse : Playing with words/45 de icare29, postée le 07-07-2023 à 23:36:53 (S | E)
Hello dear here4u , here is my sentence .

To INQUIRE ? To GAZE ? a LETTER - DEFENCELESSNESS ? VIOLENT ? NUMB ? YET ? AFTER ALL un comparatif d'inégalité.

Lien internet
(paragraphe 1)

The young policeman wasn't SO discerning AS his boss ; YET, he INQUIRED ABOUT how this thug had been guilty of several VIOLENT acts against this DEFENCELESSNESS person who AFTER ALL these injuries had still the force to GAZE AT , in her NUMB hand ,a complain LETTER...40 words

Thanks a lot for your correction and observations.
Have good holidays.

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Réponse : Playing with words/45 de melena53, postée le 09-07-2023 à 19:20:41 (S | E)
Hello here4u
Merci pour le nouveau challenge

She GAZES at this LETTER and YET with NUMBED heart, poor DEFENCELESSNESS little thing, ENQUIRES how this VIOLENT being could one day move her; AFTER ALL she wasn’t AS CUNNING AS HE WAS. 33 words

Have a nice weekend

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Réponse : Playing with words/45 de magie8, postée le 11-07-2023 à 12:22:35 (S | E)
Hello , je me confronte au jeu de mots que je viens de découvrir
VOICI ma phrase Merci
After receiving a VIOLENT LETTER of complaint about the DEFENCELESSNESS of elderly people who were attacked frequently, and faced with the NUMB authorities; The journalist decided to GAZE and INQUIRE into the area concerned, that was not AS quiet AS the others, and YET, AFTER ALL, he was skilful to do it. 52 mots

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Réponse : Playing with words/45 de littlerene24, postée le 23-07-2023 à 21:35:49 (S | E)
Hello dear here4u! Here is my sentence


Never YET he felt AS in a bad way AS this time when he had GAZED this disgusting LETTER, so VIOLENT, which let him NUMB with the fear and in DEFENCELESSNESS, but, AFTER ALL, he was an adult now and he decided to INQUIRE about the writer. (47 words)

Thanks for your correction.
Friendly

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Réponse : Playing with words/45 de tchao, postée le 24-07-2023 à 10:48:52 (S | E)
Hello everybody !
Je m'essaie à ce jeu ...Merci here4u
AFTER ALL it was a simple LETTER, NOT SO VIOLENT, but she GAZED at it a long time, become NUMB to the whirling wind, INQUIRING why it let her so DEFENCELESS YET. 32 mots

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Réponse : Playing with words/45 de mad14, postée le 25-07-2023 à 15:36:48 (S | E)
Hello Here4U - (Writing in the rain...!)

She held the LETTER in her hands, GAZING into space, she wasn't ready to receive this VIOLENT news YET, she felt NUMB, she remained DEFENCELESSNESS and INQUIRING about why; AFTER ALL she wasn't AS strong AS a horse! (38 words)

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Réponse : Playing with words/45 de here4u, postée le 31-07-2023 à 23:26:27 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Happy to see that a few of you have tried to make the perfect sentence!
Pour respecter les règles que j'ai moi-même crées, , et la grammaire, j'ai été obligée de modifier légèrement certains passages...
J'espère que cela ne trahit pas (trop) vos idées...


- The policeman wasn't SO discerning AS his boss; YET he INQUIRED ABOUT this thug who despite his DEFENCELESSNESS, had been guilty of several VIOLENT acts against a person who AFTER ALL their injuries could still GAZE AT the complainT LETTER, in their NUMB hands...45 words


- She GAZES at this LETTER and YET with a NUMB(ED) heart, though with DEFENCELESSNESS, she ENQUIRES how this VIOLENT being could one day have moved her; AFTER ALL she wasn’t AS CUNNING AS HE WAS. 36 words


- After receiving a VIOLENT complaint LETTER about the DEFENCELESSNESS of elderly people who were attacked frequently, and faced with the NUMB authorities, the journalist decided to GAZE and INQUIRE into the area, that was not AS quiet AS the others; YET, for sure AFTER ALL, he was right to do it. 50 mots



- Never YET had he felt in such a bad way AS this time, GAZING at this disgusting LETTER, so VIOLENT that had let him NUMB with fear and DEFENCELESSNESS; AFTER ALL, he was an adult and he decided to INQUIRE about the writer. (43 words)



- AFTER ALL it was a simple LETTER, and NOT SO VIOLENT as usual, but she GAZED at it a long time, became NUMB to the whirling wind, INQUIRING with DEFENCELESS but hopeful YET. 33 mots



- She held the LETTER in her hands, GAZING into space, she wasn't ready to receive this VIOLENT news YET, she felt NUMB, wrapped in DEFENCELESSNESS and INQUIRING about why AFTER ALL she wasn't AS strong AS a horse! (40 words)

Encore et pour tout ce beau travail!

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