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Message de aurelia25 posté le 12-03-2013 à 09:48:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
s'il vous plait pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger des phrases?
Merci beaucoup de votre aide.
She was a model until she decided to become an actress.
She began to apply for parts.
She got her a role.
Since she was young , she is passionated about the art.
She got a role in a new sciences fiction series.
A series where there is the most incredible love triangle.
She has proved taht she has a lot of talent because she can play 2 characters.
She fell in love with Ian.
She created t shirts which were sold
Merci d'avance :D
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-03-2013 11:24
Message de aurelia25 posté le 12-03-2013 à 09:48:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
s'il vous plait pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger des phrases?
Merci beaucoup de votre aide.
She was a model until she decided to become an actress.
She began to apply for parts.
She got her a role.
Since she was young , she is passionated about the art.
She got a role in a new sciences fiction series.
A series where there is the most incredible love triangle.
She has proved taht she has a lot of talent because she can play 2 characters.
She fell in love with Ian.
She created t shirts which were sold
Merci d'avance :D
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-03-2013 11:24
Réponse: Phrases/ correction de laure95, postée le 12-03-2013 à 11:33:56 (S | E)
Bonjour,
She was a model until she decided to become an actress. OK
She began to apply for parts. Que veux-tu dire par "parts"?
She got her a role. Pourquoi HER?
Since she was young , she is passionated about the art. Comme tu utilises SINCE, tu dois utiliser le present perfect dans la
2è partie de ta phrase car tu exprimes une passion qui a débutée étant jeune et que tu as toujours.
She got a role in a new sciences fiction series. pas de "s" à la fin de "science".
A series where there is the most incredible love triangle. OK
She has proved taht she has a lot of talent because she can play 2 characters. OK
She fell in love with Ian. OK
She created t shirts which were sold OK
Réponse: Phrases/ correction de aurelia25, postée le 12-03-2013 à 13:18:01 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
par parts je veux dire des roles :p
et j'en ai oublié une :
we can see her in many movies
Merci d'avance
Réponse: Phrases/ correction de laure95, postée le 13-03-2013 à 13:42:04 (S | E)
Ok, alors ta phrase avec "parts" est correcte, ainsi que celle que tu as rajoutée.
Réponse: Phrases/ correction de aurelia25, postée le 13-03-2013 à 18:46:55 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour ton aide .
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