Walt Disney/exposé

Walt Disney/exposé
Message de petitpingouin posté le 22-03-2013 à 22:11:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!

je dois faire un exposé sur Walt Disney et j'aimerais ( si possible ) que vous puissiez me corriger !
Merci pour vos réponses.

Walt Disney was born on five December nineteen one at Chicago. He's dead in fifteen December thousand nine hundred and sixty six.
He was knew as producer, director, screenwriter, actor and Americcan animator of cartoons.
In thousand nine hundred and twenty three, he founded the company Walt Disney Company and becam one of the producers oh the most famous films.
He's also the creator of Mickey mouse.
DisneyLand open his doors in thousand nin hundred ans fifty five and quickly a success. The attractions have adapted to many films ans visitors from around the world come to the park.
Walter Elias Disney product many educational films. He's the producer of :
-Blanche neige et les 7nains in nineteent thirty seven (1937)
-pinocchio in nineteen forty (1940)
- Dumbo in nineteent forty one (1941)
- Bambi in nineteen forty two (1942)
- Les 101 Dalmatiens in nineteen sixty one (1961)
- Le livre de la jungle in nineteen sixty seven (1967)

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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-03-2013 22:28

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Réponse: Walt Disney/exposé de esharman, postée le 24-03-2013 à 05:03:21 (S | E)
Hello,

Walt Disney was born on five December nineteen one at Chicago. He's dead in fifteen December thousand nine hundred and sixty six.
He was knew as producer, director, screenwriter, actor and Americcan animator of cartoons.
In thousand nine hundred and twenty three, he founded the company Walt Disney Company and became one of the producers oh the most famous films.
He's also the creator of Mickey mouse.
DisneyLand open his doors in thousand nin hundred ans fifty five and quickly a success. The attractions have adapted to many films ans visitors from around the world come to the park.
Walter Elias Disney product many educational films. He's the producer of :
-Blanche neige et les 7nains in nineteent thirty seven (1937)
-pinocchio in nineteen forty (1940)
- Dumbo in nineteent forty one (1941)
- Bambi in nineteen forty two (1942)
- Les 101 Dalmatiens in nineteen sixty one (1961)
- Le livre de la jungle in nineteen sixty seven (1967)

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(For this next part, you might want to put the English title of the film! )
Walter Elias Disney produced many educational films. He's the producer of:
- Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs (1940)
- Pinocchio (1940)
- Dumbo (1941)
- Bambi (1942)
- 101 Dalmations (1961)
- The Jungle Book (1967)

That was quite good! All you really needed to fix were the years, and some of the verbs You can always write the number of the year, eg. 1991 instead of nineteen-ninety one, because it is easier!
DO NOT INCLUDE the brackets () with OR in them, they are for you only!
Bien écrit!

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-03-2013 07:59
Pas de correction toute faite. Merci d'utiliser le bleu par exemple pour indiquer les fautes.

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