Phrases/ correction
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Message de aurelia25 posté le 23-03-2013 à 14:34:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger mes phrases?
Merci d'avance.
Live your life,
black, white, whatever, we have the right to dream, to believe, to fight and to win
This period is finished :we can die in peace and you live in peace.
Good luck and do not judge without knowing.
In 1960 , I met a white man.I fell in love with him. At the end of Segregation ,I was married with him.We had a son named Martin.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-03-2013 16:33
Message de aurelia25 posté le 23-03-2013 à 14:34:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger mes phrases?
Merci d'avance.
Live your life,
black, white, whatever, we have the right to dream, to believe, to fight and to win
This period is finished :we can die in peace and you live in peace.
Good luck and do not judge without knowing.
In 1960 , I met a white man.I fell in love with him. At the end of Segregation ,I was married with him.We had a son named Martin.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-03-2013 16:33
Réponse: Phrases/ correction de gerondif, postée le 23-03-2013 à 19:14:40 (S | E)
Hello,
Live your life,
black, white, whatever, we have the right to dream, to believe, to fight and to win
This period is finished :we can die in peace and you (can) live in peace.
Good luck and do not judge without knowing.
In 1960 , I met a white man.I fell in love with him. At the end of Segregation ,I was married with him (I married him,je l'ai épousé verbe transitif).We had a son named Martin.
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