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Message de jbugg posté le 04-04-2013 à 12:29:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je souhaite savoir si mes traductions sont correctes , s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour votre aide
Bonne journée !
A charismatic leader is usually a speaker prestige, adored by a significant portion of a given community. The causes of the charisma of a person remain elusive: the voice, the gesture, the presence of the components are usually cited. Often add the symbolic representation of the person's experience, contribution, courage and a series of qualities which bind this community in a charismatic person. While it remains difficult to explain, charisma is essentially contextual.
The charismatic leader is able to inspire and motivate people to do more than they normally would have done despite obstacles and personal sacrifice involved. The charismatic leader has an emotional impact on others, because it uses both the heart and mind.
You can be a leader without being charismatic. A society needs leaders charismatic if possible. The charism there is a notion of heart, a human casting, unlike the leadership or the notions of competitiveness and egocentrism are more important. However, say that it is a charismatic leader is not a tautology. The advantage of one over the other is measured in terms of cohesion and proximity with a group.
Become a charismatic is awareness and a desire to include this changed over time. We must begin by asking the question: am I able to engage and take risks?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2013 12:58
Message de jbugg posté le 04-04-2013 à 12:29:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je souhaite savoir si mes traductions sont correctes , s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour votre aide
Bonne journée !
A charismatic leader is usually a speaker prestige, adored by a significant portion of a given community. The causes of the charisma of a person remain elusive: the voice, the gesture, the presence of the components are usually cited. Often add the symbolic representation of the person's experience, contribution, courage and a series of qualities which bind this community in a charismatic person. While it remains difficult to explain, charisma is essentially contextual.
The charismatic leader is able to inspire and motivate people to do more than they normally would have done despite obstacles and personal sacrifice involved. The charismatic leader has an emotional impact on others, because it uses both the heart and mind.
You can be a leader without being charismatic. A society needs leaders charismatic if possible. The charism there is a notion of heart, a human casting, unlike the leadership or the notions of competitiveness and egocentrism are more important. However, say that it is a charismatic leader is not a tautology. The advantage of one over the other is measured in terms of cohesion and proximity with a group.
Become a charismatic is awareness and a desire to include this changed over time. We must begin by asking the question: am I able to engage and take risks?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2013 12:58
Réponse: Correction/be charismatic de gerondif, postée le 04-04-2013 à 18:17:45 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
la traduction semble assez littérale, soit le traducteur automatique si c'est le cas n'a pas trop fait d'erreurs, soit vous êtes très proche du texte français de départ: ( Après correction, vu le type d'erreurs, je pencherais pour le traducteur automatique.....)
A charismatic leader is usually a speaker prestige,(il faut l'adjectif et pas le nom, placé devant speaker) adored by a significant portion of a given community. The causes of the charisma of a person remain elusive: the voice, the gesture, the presence of the components are usually cited. Often add the symbolic representation of the person's experience, contribution, courage and a series of qualities which bind this community in(lier à? in est faux alors) a charismatic person. While it remains difficult to explain, charisma is essentially contextual.
The charismatic leader is able to inspire and motivate people to do more than they normally would have done despite obstacles and personal sacrifices involved. The charismatic leader has an emotional impact on others, because it(qui est ce il neutre ? ) uses both the heart and the mind.
You can be a leader without being charismatic. A society needs leaders charismatic (ordre des mots à la française)if possible. The charism there is a notion of heart, a human casting (sens?), unlike the leadership or(vous vous êtes fait avoir, le traducteur a traduit "ou" sans accent par "or" alors que vous vouliez dire "où", where. DOMMAGE!
) the notions of competitiveness and egocentrism are more important. However, say that (dire que.... mauvais temps, il faut un infinitif ou un gérondif)it is a charismatic leader is not a tautology. The advantage of one over the other is measured in terms of cohesion and proximity with a group.Become (mauvais temps, il faut un gérondif) a charismatic **** (charismatic est un adjectif, donc un charismatique quoi ?) is awareness and a desire to include this changed over time. We must begin by asking the question: am I able to engage and take risks?
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