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Message de oralbac posté le 24-04-2013 à 22:31:11 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous,
j'aimerais savoir où se situent mes fautes dans ce texte. Je remercie sincèrement d'avance ceux qui m'apporteraient leur aide!
J'ai mis en rouge ce sur quoi je doutais beaucoup !
After that, we are going to talk about the witch hunt, which have marked American history. We listened to an audio document, called “Which is witch?” In Salem, in the 17th century, more than 150 people were accused of witchcraft. It was really a wave of accusations, paranoia and hysteria. This case had a profound impact: it indirectly led to the founding principles of the USA. But three centuries later, between 1950 and 1960, death sentences, mock trials and mass hatred punctuated the grim years of the McCarthyism, during the cold war. Lots of people suspected others, including many directors, of having links with the USSR. Anew, a witch hunt began at this time. The witches of Salem are the story of another time and nevertheless so contemporary.
As for me, since the creation of the USA, myths and heroes rhythm the thinking of the American people, because they are part of American history. Looking into the history of the USA, it is necessarily knowing this notion.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-04-2013 22:34
Message de oralbac posté le 24-04-2013 à 22:31:11 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous,
j'aimerais savoir où se situent mes fautes dans ce texte. Je remercie sincèrement d'avance ceux qui m'apporteraient leur aide!
J'ai mis en rouge ce sur quoi je doutais beaucoup !
After that, we are going to talk about the witch hunt, which have marked American history. We listened to an audio document, called “Which is witch?” In Salem, in the 17th century, more than 150 people were accused of witchcraft. It was really a wave of accusations, paranoia and hysteria. This case had a profound impact: it indirectly led to the founding principles of the USA. But three centuries later, between 1950 and 1960, death sentences, mock trials and mass hatred punctuated the grim years of the McCarthyism, during the cold war. Lots of people suspected others, including many directors, of having links with the USSR. Anew, a witch hunt began at this time. The witches of Salem are the story of another time and nevertheless so contemporary.
As for me, since the creation of the USA, myths and heroes rhythm the thinking of the American people, because they are part of American history. Looking into the history of the USA, it is necessarily knowing this notion.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-04-2013 22:34
Réponse: Correction/sorcellerie de notrepere, postée le 25-04-2013 à 05:48:00 (S | E)
HelloAfter that, we are going to talk about the witch hunt(1), which have marked American history. We listened to an audio document, called “Which is witch?” In Salem, in the 17th century, more than 150 people were accused of witchcraft. It was really a wave of accusations, paranoia and hysteria. This case had a profound impact: it indirectly led to the founding principles of the USA. But three centuries later, between 1950 and 1960, death sentences, mock trials and mass hatred punctuated the grim years of the McCarthyism, during the cold war. Lots of people suspected others, including many directors, of having links with the USSR.
As for me, since the creation
of the USA, myths and heroes rhythm the thinking of the American people, because they are part of American history. Looking into the history of the USA, it is necessarily knowing this notion. (1)pluriel
Réponse: Correction/sorcellerie de oralbac, postée le 25-04-2013 à 10:04:24 (S | E)
Hello!
After that, we are going to talk about the witch hunts, which have marked American history. We listened to an audio document, called “Which is witch?” In Salem, in the 17th century, more than 150 people were accused of witchcraft. It was really a wave of accusations, paranoia and hysteria. This case had a profound impact: it indirectly led to the founding principles of the USA. But three centuries later, between 1950 and 1960, death sentences, mock trials and mass hatred punctuated the grim years of McCarthyism, during the Cold War. Lots of people suspected others, including many directors, of having links with the USSR. A witch hunt began anew at this time. The witches of Salem is the story of another time and nevertheless so contemporary.
As for me, since the foundation of the USA, myths and heroes have been in the thinking of the American people, because they are part of American history. Looking into the history of the USA, it is necessarily to know this notion.
Rouge: je ne suis pas sûr du tout.
Vert: je suis presque sûr.
Merci de votre réponse, notrepere !
Réponse: Correction/sorcellerie de oralbac, postée le 26-04-2013 à 09:45:15 (S | E)
Hello !
Une petite réponse pour ma dernière phrase ?
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