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Message de berlyn posté le 29-04-2013 à 18:50:13 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
J'ai réalisé une expression écrite sur le rôle des grands-parents dans la vie d'un enfant et j'aimerais que vous me disiez mes erreurs en ce qui concerne l'orthographe.
Merci d'avance.
Grandparents, by vertue of their age and experience have always enjoyed the most respectable status in our sociely. They have many roles in child life. In fact, their principal mission consern the education of the child. If they are rather old, they have many experiance in the life. Consequently, they knows many things not to do that teach to their children so as to children doesn't do that. So, often, grandparents are example. Moreover, they transmit their own experiance and many value as wisdom, politeness, respect for the laws, and family life.
Grandparents offers time and tenderness. They play with their child in order to not child be bored.
To conclued, I would say that my grandparents are very important for me. Every days, they teach me new things.
Thanks!
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Edited by lucile83 on 29-04-2013 21:10
Message de berlyn posté le 29-04-2013 à 18:50:13 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
J'ai réalisé une expression écrite sur le rôle des grands-parents dans la vie d'un enfant et j'aimerais que vous me disiez mes erreurs en ce qui concerne l'orthographe.
Merci d'avance.
Grandparents, by vertue of their age and experience have always enjoyed the most respectable status in our sociely. They have many roles in child life. In fact, their principal mission consern the education of the child. If they are rather old, they have many experiance in the life. Consequently, they knows many things not to do that teach to their children so as to children doesn't do that. So, often, grandparents are example. Moreover, they transmit their own experiance and many value as wisdom, politeness, respect for the laws, and family life.
Grandparents offers time and tenderness. They play with their child in order to not child be bored.
To conclued, I would say that my grandparents are very important for me. Every days, they teach me new things.
Thanks!
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Edited by lucile83 on 29-04-2013 21:10
Réponse: Essai /grands-parents de hushpuppy, postée le 29-04-2013 à 23:19:35 (S | E)
Hello,
Grandparents, by vertue
of their age and experience have always enjoyed the most respectable status in our sociely. They have many roles in __ child (possessor) life. In fact, their principal mission consern the education of the child. If they are rather old, they have many experiance in many things not to do that (action) teach to their children so children (singular throughout or plural throughout) doesn't do that. So, often, grandparents are __ example. Moreover, they transmit their own experiance and many value ___ as wisdom, politeness, respect for the laws (for the law, or for laws, not both), and family life.Grandparents offers
time and tenderness. They play with their child (this would mean their son or daughter, in which case, they would be parents, not grandparents) in order (to not child be bored) (try to rephrase, keeping sentence structure in mind)., I would say that my grandparents are very important for me. Every days, they teach me new things. -------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 30-04-2013 06:43
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