Correction/Héros

Correction/Héros
Message de lydiia95 posté le 13-05-2013 à 12:16:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me dire s'il vous plaît s'il y a des fautes en anglais ?
Merci pour vos réponses.

Ma traduction :
1) Martin Luther King is my hero because he was opposed to segregation, he had the courage to oppose the whites. It brought together the nation's blacks and whites to their eyes open. He wanted equality for all, he fought against discrimination in terms of suffrage, justice, education, and political representation. It was this dynamic, witty who captured his audience laugh, makes you think the people in his speeches. This is still the hero of Americans.

2) Martin Luther King was able to open the exchange between blacks and whites through diplomacy, intelligence. He was awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom by Jimmy Carter in 1977, the price of human rights United Nations in 1978, the Congressional Gold Medal in 2004, and is considered one of the greatest American speakers. Since 1986, the Martin Luther King Day is a holiday in the United States. He destroyed and opened this moral boundary that existed between blacks and whites. A kind of imaginary border, unequal and racist which is based on the genetic skin color.

3) Martin Luther King fight against segregation suffered by blacks through love, faith and science. He was against violence and civil disobedience. Imagine when blacks have learned to read the Bible. They have read all humans were equal on earth! And that's what disliked who pushed to fight against racism firmly. He had managed to eradicate these inequalities large scales. Location and form of power? Look, today is a black president who runs America. This is proof that they have successfully combated reversing power.

4) Martin Luther King has advanced the American people by guaranteeing rights for all people regardless of race. It has advanced the people through science and politics. It has advanced the people through love and freedom. A block can become a doctor can become a black president like Obama.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-05-2013 14:35

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Réponse: Correction/Héros de gnanga, postée le 14-05-2013 à 13:07:49 (S | E)
Lidia

concerning your 2nd tense, i detect some falses errors and i put I highlight them in blue:

2) Martin Luther King was able to open the exchange (badly said) between blacks and whites through diplomacy, intelligence(what do you mean? in French please). He was awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom by Jimmy Carter in 1977, the price of human rights United Nations in 1978 (Genelarly you have to begin you tense with a date and it was badly said), the Congressional Gold Medal in 2004, and is considered like one of the greatest American speakers. Since 1986, the Martin Luther King Day is a holiday in the United States. He reduced and opened (use another words) this moral boundary that existed between blacks and whites. A kind of imaginary border, unequal and racist(badly said) which is based on the genetic skin color.
Good luck

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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2013 14:14

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Réponse: Correction/Héros de gnanga, postée le 14-05-2013 à 17:48:51 (S | E)
Hi Lydiia95,

As the 2nd tense I do the same things, I mean to higlight some errors in blue color:

1) Martin Luther King is my hero because he was opposed to segregation, he had the courage to oppose (badly said) the whites. ItHe brought together the nation's blacks and whites to their eyes open (nonsense, in french please). He wanted (use another words) equality for all, he fought against discrimination (badly said) in terms of voting rights is better,justice, education, and political representation. It was this dynamic and witty who captured his audience laugh, makes (bad tense) you think the people in his speeches(mean!!). This is still the hero of Americans (badly said).
good luck
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Modifié par gnanga le 14-05-2013 17:50



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Modifié par gnanga le 14-05-2013 17:59

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Réponse: Correction/Héros de notrepere, postée le 14-05-2013 à 19:10:55 (S | E)
Bonjour

1) Martin Luther King is my hero because he was opposed to segregation, and he had the courage to oppose the whiteshis oppressors. He brought together the nation's blacks and whites to their eyes open (ordre des mots). He wanted equality for all, he fought against discrimination in the realms of suffrage, justice, education, and political representation. It was this dynamic, witty who captured his audience laugh, makes you think the people in his speeches. He is still an American hero.

2) Martin Luther King was able to open a dialogue between blacks and whites through diplomacy. He was awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom by Jimmy Carter in 1977, the price(mauvaise traduction du mot 'prix') of human rights United Nations in 1978, the Congressional Gold Medal in 2004, and is considered one of the greatest American speakers. Since 1986, the Martin Luther King Day is(le mot 'since' demande un autre temps en anglais) a holiday in the United States. He destroyed and opened this moral boundary that existed between blacks and whites. A kind of imaginary border, unequal and racist which is based on the genetic skin color.

3) Martin Luther King fight(temps) against segregation suffered by blacks through love, faith and science. He was against violence and civil disobedience. Imagine when blacks have learned (temps) to read the Bible. They have read (temps) that all humans were equal on earth! And that's what those who fought firmly against racism disliked. He had managed to eradicate these inequalities on large scales. Location and form of power Look, today there is a black president who runs America. This is proof that they have successfully combated reversing power.

4) Martin Luther King has advanced the American people by guaranteeing rights for all people regardless of race. He has advanced the people through science and politics. He has advanced the people through love and freedom. A block can become a doctor can become a black president like Obama.

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