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Message de quentv10 posté le 26-03-2014 à 22:31:28 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir tout le monde ,
j'aurais besoin d'un peu d'aide pour corriger mon texte d'anglais , plus particulièrement ma lettre. Il fallait faire une lettre qu'a écrit un jeune garçon pour ses parents car il est parti en Amérique.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide.
Bonne soirée
Stefan Blau
62 Streets Lexington Avenue
10001 Manhattan
Mom and Dad,
I'm sorry I haven't written before, but I realized my dream, I am in America at Manhattan. Manhattan is a wonderful city, with extraordinary landscapes. I am currently working in America in elegant French restaurant. My boss is very nice.
For from Germany, When I reached toward Amsterdam and i walked through cold nights and days, i resting in barns or churches only when I was too chilled or exhausted to keep moving. When I arrived in Amsterdam I took a boat to go to America and I was fortunate to be hired on board for working in the kitchen. I is not pay for my ticket. I hope you also gonna and you could come and see me in America
Kiss Stefan
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2014 07:56
Message de quentv10 posté le 26-03-2014 à 22:31:28 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir tout le monde ,
j'aurais besoin d'un peu d'aide pour corriger mon texte d'anglais , plus particulièrement ma lettre. Il fallait faire une lettre qu'a écrit un jeune garçon pour ses parents car il est parti en Amérique.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide.
Bonne soirée
Stefan Blau
62 Streets Lexington Avenue
10001 Manhattan
Mom and Dad,
I'm sorry I haven't written before, but I realized my dream, I am in America at Manhattan. Manhattan is a wonderful city, with extraordinary landscapes. I am currently working in America in elegant French restaurant. My boss is very nice.
For from Germany, When I reached toward Amsterdam and i walked through cold nights and days, i resting in barns or churches only when I was too chilled or exhausted to keep moving. When I arrived in Amsterdam I took a boat to go to America and I was fortunate to be hired on board for working in the kitchen. I is not pay for my ticket. I hope you also gonna and you could come and see me in America
Kiss Stefan
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2014 07:56
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