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Message de xsaaraah posté le 15-05-2014 à 19:48:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez vous m'aider à corriger les fautes s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour votre aide.
It is unquestionable, for some years the technology continues to evolve. Who could have imagined that one can talk to a phone and we respond? Or we can send messages through his sunglasses? Anybody !
But this technology goes far. Since the army launched its remote aeroplane to go on other continents without human on board a large distribution group had decided to appropriate the idea.
Amazon, number 1 of online shop, said the new delivery system "pimeair" he would organise. To sum up, this is a mini helicopter called "octocopter" that would deliver half an hour after the order is placed.
It is favourable towards of environment because it would reduce the number of lorries making deliveries. The disadvantage of these drones is that they couldn't transport packages over 3 pounds. This service must be in place for 2018. For now, Amazon expects the agreement of the U.S. government because there are several norms to be respected.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-05-2014 21:39
Message de xsaaraah posté le 15-05-2014 à 19:48:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez vous m'aider à corriger les fautes s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour votre aide.
It is unquestionable, for some years the technology continues to evolve. Who could have imagined that one can talk to a phone and we respond? Or we can send messages through his sunglasses? Anybody !
But this technology goes far. Since the army launched its remote aeroplane to go on other continents without human on board a large distribution group had decided to appropriate the idea.
Amazon, number 1 of online shop, said the new delivery system "pimeair" he would organise. To sum up, this is a mini helicopter called "octocopter" that would deliver half an hour after the order is placed.
It is favourable towards of environment because it would reduce the number of lorries making deliveries. The disadvantage of these drones is that they couldn't transport packages over 3 pounds. This service must be in place for 2018. For now, Amazon expects the agreement of the U.S. government because there are several norms to be respected.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-05-2014 21:39
Réponse: Correction/technologie de bluduck2, postée le 16-05-2014 à 09:51:52 (S | E)
Hello saraahaa !quelques remarques
Voc ligne 1 ,plutôt que "to continue", utilisez "to go on "
ligne 1 ,plutôt que "to respond", utilisez "to answer"
ligne 2 cherchez "personne" dans le dictionnaire ("anybody" veut dire "n'importe qui")
ligne 8 ,plutôt que "to respect" ,utilisez "to enforce " (a law, a regulation)
Gr ligne 1 :to go on+verb+ing
ligne 1 FOR+present perfect
ligne 1 ,ligne 2 pour traduire "on" ,gardez le même pronom personnel (I ,we ,he..) I /we receive an answer
ligne 3 SINCE+present perfect
ligne 3 to go to
ligne 5 without+article+nom
ligne 5 précisez Amazon , the company (=it /they)
ligne 7 oubli de l'article devant "environment"
ligne 8 plutôt que "must be ", préférez "could be" (c'est possible"),ou "might be" (c'est une éventualité )
Hope this helps ! Bluduck2
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