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Message de kaleid posté le 09-12-2014 à 19:59:55 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un s'il a le temps et la gentillesse veuille bien m'aider à corriger mon résumé.
Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui prendront le temps de m'aider!
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "life".It was published by the United States of America during the world war II on july 1943.We can notice a girl who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that she is a member of the U.S Army and more precisely we can say that she is a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite of being under age,she has the detemination,the courage and the will power to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think that she has a patrioctic feeling, but she tell herself that she became a soldier in order to flee away her suffocating and narrow life with her parent.She even longed to grow indepedant of her parents,but in the start of that life she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcome this ordeal and she even fulfil his dream of becoming a Pilot.
It was surely thanks to the lack of male pilots since they were sent overseas during the World War II.A a result,there was a shorteage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worse episode of the World War II,it was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with a Aerial Raid.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne soirée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-12-2014 22:52
Message de kaleid posté le 09-12-2014 à 19:59:55 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un s'il a le temps et la gentillesse veuille bien m'aider à corriger mon résumé.
Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui prendront le temps de m'aider!
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "life".It was published by the United States of America during the world war II on july 1943.We can notice a girl who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that she is a member of the U.S Army and more precisely we can say that she is a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite of being under age,she has the detemination,the courage and the will power to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think that she has a patrioctic feeling, but she tell herself that she became a soldier in order to flee away her suffocating and narrow life with her parent.She even longed to grow indepedant of her parents,but in the start of that life she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcome this ordeal and she even fulfil his dream of becoming a Pilot.
It was surely thanks to the lack of male pilots since they were sent overseas during the World War II.A a result,there was a shorteage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worse episode of the World War II,it was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with a Aerial Raid.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne soirée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-12-2014 22:52
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de gerondif, postée le 09-12-2014 à 22:37:44 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
erreurs en bleu.
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "life".It was published by the United States of America during
It was surely thanks to the lack of male pilots since they were sent overseas during
One of the worse(superlatif) episode(pluriel) of
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de kaleid, postée le 09-12-2014 à 23:42:02 (S | E)
Bonsoir!
Tout d'abord je tiens à vous remercier de votre aide ^^!
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "life".It was published by the United States of America during world war II.We can notice a girl who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that she is a member of the U.S Army and more precisely we can say that she is a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite being under age,she has the determination,the courage and the will power to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think that she has a patrioctic feeling, but she tells herself that she became a soldier in order to flee away her suffocating and narrow life with her parents.She even longed to grow independant of her parents,but since the start of that life she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcomes this ordeal and she even fulfils her dream of becoming a Pilot.
It was surely thanks to the lack of male pilots since they were sent overseas during World War II.A a result,there was a shorteage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worst episodes of World War II, was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with an aerial raid.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne nuit ^^!
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de gerondif, postée le 09-12-2014 à 23:54:47 (S | E)
On y est presque!
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "life".It was published by the United States of America during world war II.We can notice a girl who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that she is a member of the U.S Army and more precisely we can say that she is a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite being under age,she has(had?) the determination,the courage and the will power to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think that she has a patrioctic feeling, but she tells herself that she became a soldier in order to flee away (je mettrais soit flee tout seul soit flee away from) her suffocating and narrow life with her parents.She even longed to grow independant of her parents,but since the start of(at the beginning of est bien plus simple) that life she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcomes this ordeal and she even fulfils her dream of becoming a Pilot.
It was surely thanks to ( grâce à ou à cause de ??)the lack of male pilots since they were sent overseas during World War II.A a result,there was a shorteage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worst episodes of World War II, was the Blitz.It is a world episode (a major event),when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with an aerial raid (au pluriel peut-être en fait).
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de kaleid, postée le 10-12-2014 à 15:25:56 (S | E)
Bonjour!
Tout d'abord, je tiens à vous remercier de votre aide ^^!
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "life".It was published by the United States of America during world war II.We can notice a girl who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that she is a member of the U.S Army and more precisely we can say that she is a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite being under age,she had the determination,the courage and the will power to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think that she has a patrioctic feeling, but she tells herself that she became a soldier in order to flee away from her suffocating and narrow life with her parents.She even longed to grow independant of her parents,but at the beginning of that life she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcomes this ordeal and she even fulfils her dream of becoming a Pilot.
It was surely due the lack of male pilots since they were sent overseas during World War II.A a result,there was a shorteage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worst episodes of World War II, was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with aerials raids.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne journée!
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de bluestar, postée le 10-12-2014 à 16:07:02 (S | E)
Bonjour...
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "Llife".It was published by the United States of America during world war II.We can notice a girl who is sitting on the wing of a plane, sSo,we can assume that she is a member of the U.S Army (Air Force?) and more precisely we can say that she is a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite being under age,she had the determination,the courage and the will power (willpower - un mot) to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think that she has a patrioctic feeling, but she tells herself that she became a soldier(pilot?) in order to flee away from her suffocating and narrow life with her parents.She even longed to grow independant of her parents,but at the beginning of that life she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcomes this ordeal and she even fulfils her dream of becoming a Pilot.
It was surely due the lack of male pilots since they were sent overseas during World War II.As a result,there was a shorteage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worst episodes of World War II, was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with aerials air raids.
Les verbes sont un mélange du passé et du temps présent, par exemple, "she had no money..she overcomes this ordeal"
Pilot n'est est pas un nom propre et n'a pas besoin de commencer par une lettre majuscule sauf au début d'une phrase.
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de kaleid, postée le 10-12-2014 à 16:59:20 (S | E)
Bonjour!
Tout d'abord,je tiens à vous remercie de votre aide ainsi que votre remarque pertinente en ce qui concerne les temps.Je vais arranger cela sur le champ!
Voilà le texte après modification:
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "Life".It was published by the United States of America, during world war II.
We can notice a girl, who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that, she was a member of the U.S Air Forces and more precisely we can say that she was a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite, being under age,she had the determination,the courage and the will power to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think, that she had a patriotic feeling, but she told herself, she became a pilot in order to flee away from her suffocating and narrow life with her parents.She even longed to grow independent of her parents,but at the beginning of that life, she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcame this ordeal and she even could fulfilled her dream of becoming a Pilot.
It was surely due the lack of male pilots, since they were sent overseas during World War II.As a result,there was a shortage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worst episodes of World War II, was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with air raids.
Sur ce je vous souhaite à tous une bonne fin de journée!
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de bluestar, postée le 10-12-2014 à 17:12:51 (S | E)
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "Life".It was published by the United States of America, during World War II.
We can notice a girl, who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that, she was a member of the U.S Air Forces(singulier) and more precisely we can say that she was a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite, being under age,she had the determination,the courage and the will power willpower to be enlisted as a pPilot.We can think, that she had a patriotic feeling, but she told herself, she became a pilot in order to flee
It was surely due to the lack of male pilots, since they were sent overseas during World War II.As a result,there was a shortage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worst episodes of World War II, was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with air raids. when German air raids destroyed London and other English cities... serait mieux
Réponse: A pilot/ in W W II de kaleid, postée le 10-12-2014 à 17:38:33 (S | E)
Bonjour!
The document is the front cover of a magazine called "Life".It was published by the United States of America, during World War II.
We can notice a girl, who is sitting on the wing of a plane.So,we can assume that, she was a member of the U.S Air Force and more precisely we can say that she was a pilot.The narrator is a girl, who came from a wealthy family.Despite, being under age,she had the determination,the courage and the willpower to be enlisted as a Pilot.We can think that she had a patriotic feeling, but she told herself, she became a Pilot in order to flee from her suffocating and narrow life with her parents.She even longed to grow independent of her parents,but at the beginning of that life, she had no money and no work because of her age.But she overcame this ordeal and she even fulfilled her dream of becoming a pilot.
It was surely due to the lack of male pilots, since they were sent overseas during World War II.As a result,there was a shortage of pilots,so female pilots were recruited.
One of the worst episodes of World War II, was the Blitz.It is a world episode,when Germany bombed London and some other English big cities with air raids.
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