Correction/ 5 lignes

Correction/ 5 lignes
Message de gadocartoon posté le 14-02-2015 à 20:01:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
J'aimerais prendre contact avec des personnes à New-York mais j'aimerais être sûr que mon message est bien écrit. Le voici ci-dessous et merci d'avance de m'annoncer les erreurs que j'aurais pu faire.

"Good morning sir, Good morning madam,
I am Gianni and I come from Belgium where I’m studying the international trade in Brussels. In june I hope to finish my bachelor’s degree, but before, I must write a thesis by a complete analysis about a new and famous concept. Then I chose Brogla.
As I can see, you are one of many members of the Brogla concept. This is why I am asking you, if you would agree to help me by answering a few questions on-line ?
Thank you in advance.
Best regards,
Gianni"

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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-02-2015 07:57

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Réponse: Correction/ 5 lignes de gerondif, postée le 15-02-2015 à 13:37:25 (S | E)
Hello,
erreurs en bleu
"Good morning sir, Good morning madam,(majuscules)
I am Gianni and I come from Belgium where I’m studying the international trade in Brussels. In june (majuscule) I hope to finish my bachelor’s degree, but before, I must write a thesis by(ne convient pas) a complete analysis about a new and famous concept. Then(So, au sens de donc, then signifie alors au sens de "à ce moment là)) I chose Brogla.
As I can see, you are one of many members of the Brogla concept. This is why I am asking you, if(not wrong but you could say: This is why I wonder if you would be so kind as to answer...) you would agree to help me by answering a few questions on-line ?
Thank you in advance.
Best regards,

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Réponse: Correction/ 5 lignes de gadocartoon, postée le 19-02-2015 à 16:21:34 (S | E)
Sorry for the delay, I thought that I answered your message. Thank you a lot for the correction and the explanation.
Gianni

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