Phrases/ corriger
Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En basPhrases/ corriger
Message de maelle35 posté le 19-03-2016 à 18:47:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais savoir si mes phrases sont bonnes ou pas s'il vous plait, merci pour vos réponses.
"I don't want to come
What mum ? What do you want ?
No, that's my favourite song !
Who is this person ? I don't know her
Who is this boy ? He's so ugly ! He looks rather stupid with his unibrow. And he has a bad haircut. He's awful !
I don't want to get married with him because it's not the man I love, i'm not enamoured
I won't be able to be happy with him. My boyfriend is Mike mum, MIKE !!! Whether you like it or not. I wish I could get engaged to him
I don't care of money, you only think about yourself, you're so selfish.
I don't know this boy, I've not seen it before. I want to make my own choice. I want to follow my heart, that's the most important. You understand ?
I shouldn't feel forced to accept his arranged marriage. If only you hadn't chosen for me...
That's not fair, I warn you that after the wedding I will divorce !!"
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 19-03-2016 21:26
Message de maelle35 posté le 19-03-2016 à 18:47:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais savoir si mes phrases sont bonnes ou pas s'il vous plait, merci pour vos réponses.
"I don't want to come
What mum ? What do you want ?
No, that's my favourite song !
Who is this person ? I don't know her
Who is this boy ? He's so ugly ! He looks rather stupid with his unibrow. And he has a bad haircut. He's awful !
I don't want to get married with him because it's not the man I love, i'm not enamoured
I won't be able to be happy with him. My boyfriend is Mike mum, MIKE !!! Whether you like it or not. I wish I could get engaged to him
I don't care of money, you only think about yourself, you're so selfish.
I don't know this boy, I've not seen it before. I want to make my own choice. I want to follow my heart, that's the most important. You understand ?
I shouldn't feel forced to accept his arranged marriage. If only you hadn't chosen for me...
That's not fair, I warn you that after the wedding I will divorce !!"
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 19-03-2016 21:26
Réponse: Phrases/ corriger de gerondif, postée le 21-03-2016 à 00:38:17 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
quelques détails, erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert.
"I don't want to come
What mum ? What do you want ?
No, that's my favourite song !
Who is this person ? I don't know her
Who is this boy ? He's so ugly ! He looks rather stupid with his unibrow. And he has a bad haircut. He's awful !
I don't want to get married with (to) him because it's not the man I love, i'm not enamoured (in love) (in love with him)
I won't be able to be happy with him. My boyfriend is Mike mum, MIKE !!! Whether you like it or not. I wish I could get engaged to him
I don't care of (about)money, you only think about yourself, you're so selfish.
I don't know this boy, I've not seen it before. I want to make my own choice. I want to follow my heart, that's the most important. You understand ?
I shouldn't feel forced to accept his (this?) arranged marriage. If only you hadn't chosen for me...
That's not fair, I warn you that after the wedding I will divorce !!" (I will get a divorce / I will divorce him)
Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
